Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

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- Valentines Heart Shaped Love -

While the pale stars shine above
Entering a world beyond dreams 

When beauty shines through peaceful harmony
Shadows dance where sweet music stands spellbound
 
A link of iron our love so strong
Bells inside distant echoes bouncing over oceanic waves 

We shall never see the ghosts 
Invading purest crystal light encircled 

The words are written in white silver
Like a bolt of lightening striking clouds

On a journey of high waves in your hair
Pockets of air within skips kiss every strand  

I feel dreams meet you in daylight halfway 's 
Starlight across every wing holds strong

Heartbeats inside flames and rhythm will never die
Loving only valentines eternal, breathing sands of time 

Everything will be wonderful, as long as you're near
Embraced in sparks destinies fate ever existing romance

The quest is holding on until finding earth,s smitten angel 
My heart has found you breathtaking beautiful spirit we fly free









A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
12.02.2016
(unrhymed couplets)

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Tom Arnone May 7, 2016 at 10:32 AM It seems collaboration suites your style. As I noted in a previous post, the words seem jumbled (as if AI chosen); yet, strangely applicable. Is this a planned technique? That aside, a beautiful Valentine's Day poem. Anne-Lise Andresen May 7, 2016 at 12:25 PM - Nothing planned ...... someone fit to write together .... others do not :) - Many thanks for visiting and comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane February 27, 2016 at 1:36 PM A beautiful write Anne-Lise and Liam! Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2016 at 1:48 PM - Many thanks for visiting and comments, Cecilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Angeline Haikutwinkle February 23, 2016 at 9:48 AM Beautiful collaboration ;) Thank you for commenting on my poems and have a blessed day! Anne-Lise Andresen February 23, 2016 at 2:02 PM - Angeline, I'm happy that you like our poems :) - Many thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan February 21, 2016 at 3:29 PM Well this is very nice as always :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 23, 2016 at 2:02 PM - Debbie, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock February 14, 2016 at 11:42 AM Beautiful lines penned by both of you. HAPPY VALENTINES DAY to both you you. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2016 at 12:11 PM - Always a pleasure to see you, dear Phyllis - Many thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun February 14, 2016 at 7:47 AM Wow! This is an extreme beauty my dear friend, Anne Lise and Liam. You're perfect collaborators as always! It's always my pleasure reading your work. Happy Valentines Day to both of you! love lots and hugs, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2016 at 8:15 AM - Dear Leonora, I'm happy that you like our poems :) - Many thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath February 13, 2016 at 4:11 PM Excellent poem on Valentine's purity with beautiful picture. a CLEAR 7. Loved always my lovely lovely friend,bl Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2016 at 8:14 AM - Many thanks for the beautiful comments, a great honor to receive a 7 - Always a pleasure to see you, my friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Fleming February 13, 2016 at 3:19 PM All very beautiful lines - An elegantly constructed poem! Well done to you both! My very best regards, Anne Lise. :) john Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2016 at 3:33 PM - I'm happy that you like our poems, John :) - Many thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven February 13, 2016 at 10:43 AM Hi Anne-Lise, You both sing into the hearts of the readers with your Collaborations. Your words sing in Love's skies. Your colabborative journey keeps growing stronger and stronger. Every poem a beautiful gem on poetry's crown. Your poetic journey shall ever go on. Two excellent poets writing excellent poetry. May your hearts ever sing, may your pens ever run gold. You make Love sing my friends. Hugs....MIKE. XX A seven and into my faves. Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2016 at 11:24 AM - Many thanks for the beautiful comments, a great honor to receive a 7 + fav. - Always a pleasure to see you, my friend Vladislav - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance February 13, 2016 at 9:04 AM You two mix beauty perfectly, nicely done :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2016 at 9:31 AM - Casarah, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis February 13, 2016 at 3:52 AM Your pens make love bloom! Excellent poem, dear Anne-Lise and dear Liam! A seven to each! Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2016 at 6:15 AM - Demetrios, I'm happy that you like our poems :) - Many thanks for visiting a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich February 12, 2016 at 8:19 PM wow, you guys are at it again making really beautiful poetry together. Awesome. Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2016 at 6:16 AM - A pleasure to share with you, Andrea - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Thomas Martin February 12, 2016 at 4:35 PM Lovely and so romantic, Anne and Liam. Good capture of valentine spirit! Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2016 at 6:13 AM - Thomas, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith February 12, 2016 at 4:26 PM Very beautiful A-L and Liam Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2016 at 6:12 AM - Tim, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor February 12, 2016 at 4:14 PM Wonderful write Anne-Lise and Liam. For whoever reads this write. Their hearts will open up and feel the love and passion these special words convey. Congratulations on this dual effort. Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2016 at 6:13 AM - I'm happy that you like our poems, Michael :) - Many thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet February 12, 2016 at 3:04 PM Your collaborative poem has captured the spirit of “Valentine's Day" with words that awaken the romance that dwells in the hearts of lovers, which through neglect, has been allowed to remain dormant far too long. Emile. Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2016 at 3:22 PM - Thanks for the beautiful interpretation on our poem Emile, greatly appreciate your visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior February 12, 2016 at 2:52 PM Beautifully done Anne-Lise and Liam...another win for the heart...Happy Valentine...^WW^ Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2016 at 3:18 PM - Winged, thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - Best wishes for a romantic Valentine Day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud February 12, 2016 at 2:40 PM ohh, happy hearts seen through your endearing write, anne... have a good day and huggs Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2016 at 3:17 PM - Thanks for the lovely visit and comments, Nette - Best wishes for a romantic Valentine Day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie February 12, 2016 at 1:38 PM as always you both do well....such passion and inspiration in the stories you tell....so riveting and Beautiful, Love starts to swell....even without rhyme, you cast a wonderful spell....bravo to you both....;) Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2016 at 1:45 PM - I'm happy that you like our poems, Eric :) - Many thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid February 12, 2016 at 1:19 PM Your pen Anne lise sang beautiful in this a pleasure Co writing with you dear friend wishing you a blessed weekend pal Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2016 at 1:22 PM - A pleasure to write with you - Thank you my friend, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter February 12, 2016 at 12:48 PM Hi Anne- Lise n' Liam !:))Wow!!Wow!This is a very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each! Wishing you a very lovely weekend and a Very Happy And Beautiful Valentine's Day too!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2016 at 1:00 PM - Thanks for the lovely visit a 7 and comments, Dorian - Best wishes for a romantic Valentine Day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)