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Valentine's Day

Valentine's Day My Dear, you left last Valentine Day, when we accepted each other by heart. You promised me to be back next day. I was sure you could not delay. Every moment I was alert. My Dear, you left last Valentine Day. You should come soon, I must say. I know, you cannot hit or hurt. You promised me to be back next day. With my heart you cannot play. You can neither pretend nor flirt. My Dear, you left last Valentine Day. I am here you have gone away I am waiting to ruminate past. You promised me to be back next day. You can neither forget nor betray Days are passing, yet I must trust. My Dear, you left last Valentine Day You promised me to be back next day. 01/26/16 Sweet Valentine Contest by Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 2/25/2016 11:13:00 AM
Congrsts on your Valentine win! Oh, he must come back, Anisha!
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Date: 2/25/2016 10:03:00 AM
Valentine Villanelles almost sweet as apple jelly now read on winners’ page..You are quite the sage..Sweet Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/25/2016 7:57:00 AM
Greetings Anisha. Congrats on your well, deserved WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/23/2016 10:06:00 PM
Beautiful! Congrats on your superb win, Anisha. Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:25:00 PM
This is so lovely Anisha... no wonder a great win.. big congrats.
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Date: 2/23/2016 4:08:00 PM
Anisha, Congratulations on your "Valentine's Villanelle Challenge" have a nice day. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/12/2016 4:46:00 PM
I was reading all the Valentines one, sweet poem xoxoxo
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:18:00 PM
I wish I had the guts to try and write a villanelle. Well done.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 1/26/2016 11:41:00 PM
Why not Daniel ? Pls. try . I am waiting to read your villanelle. Anisha D

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