Laura Leiser Poet Haiku

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For Valentine Haiku plus  One Questionqu Contest

Written on 2/5/2015

Valentines Are For Lovers

Passionate longing
Here alone, yearning for you
Come here, my darling.

Your eyes caress me
Strength restrained in gentle touch
Hearts beating wildly.

Our love has no end
My soul longs for you to stay
Must you leave again?








Written on 2/5/2015

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Skat A December 3, 2015 at 1:20 AM Laura, lovely haiku, Enjoyed. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A March 29, 2015 at 9:55 PM LAURA, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA Laura Leiser March 29, 2015 at 11:06 PM Of course, Linda! You are a gifted poet!

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2015 at 6:25 PM wonderful longing, especially in the ending one. Congrats, Laura. Laura Leiser March 26, 2015 at 12:32 AM Thanks, Andrea! I enjoyed yours as well!

Jan Allison March 24, 2015 at 3:29 PM romantic yet sad write Laura - congrats:-) Hugs jan xx Laura Leiser March 26, 2015 at 12:32 AM Thanks, Jan :)

Paul Callus March 22, 2015 at 3:31 PM Lovely, romantic and seemingly sad, but I did not hear his answer! Congratulations on your podium win, Laura! // paul Laura Leiser March 22, 2015 at 6:08 PM Thank you, Paul! I am surprised and happy, too! :)

Poet Destroyer A March 22, 2015 at 1:42 PM Laura, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA Laura Leiser March 22, 2015 at 6:08 PM Thank you so much, Linda! I'm so glad you liked it and gave me such a good standing in the contest, too! I didn't expect it, and am very encouraged by it! :)

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2015 at 11:11 PM Nicely done. this contest is filling up and I am still sitting here with nothing ready for it. Laura Leiser February 6, 2015 at 11:28 PM I'm sure you'll come up with something soon, Andrea. You have a great imagination from what I see! :)

Laura Leiser February 6, 2015 at 11:48 AM Thank you for your kind comment, Broken Wings. Your poetry is lovely, too!

Constance La France February 6, 2015 at 9:08 AM Laura, your haikus are enchanting and full of love and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~ Laura Leiser February 6, 2015 at 11:49 AM Thanks for your kind comment, Broken Wings. Your poetry is lovely, too!

David Meade February 5, 2015 at 10:06 PM Yes, for lovers . . . the comings and goings . . . loving generously the ones that are in our lives . . . Laura Leiser February 5, 2015 at 10:10 PM I agree with you, David. We need to cherish the moments we have with them. Thanks for your comment. Laura Leiser February 5, 2015 at 10:06 PM Thank you for your comment, Dave. So true!

Barbara Gorelick February 5, 2015 at 8:27 PM I like all of them, but the middle one is the best! should do well in the contest. BG Laura Leiser February 5, 2015 at 8:37 PM Thank you, Barbara! I'm grateful to have a wonderful man that moves me, even after 36 yrs. of marriage!

Sandra Haight February 5, 2015 at 8:24 PM Very romantic valentine and a such a smooth-flowing triple Haiku. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Laura Leiser February 5, 2015 at 8:36 PM Thank you, Sandra! After 36 yrs. Of marriage, I still feel this way :)