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Valentine Schmalentine

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VALENTINE SCHMALENTINE Walking on bleeding hearts like eggshell parts My valentine broke Cupid’s angel wings I don’t know what to believe when he brings Ample heart-shaped boxes of Chocolate darts We’ve been together since I don’t know when He loves me he loves me not a gold ring He comes home when he wants to, it’s his thing Doesn’t like when I question where’s he been Hopefully he’ll propose on bended knee Expecting a dozen wild red roses Or lay some myself where he decomposes And his valentine, that’s me, will be free 1/21/2017 Contest

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/1/2017 5:15:00 AM

Congrats Kim, for your well, deserved top placement with this awesome piece!!! ;-)

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/31/2017 10:15:00 AM

Congratulations Mrs Kim on your placement in the contest. For his sake, I hope you get your roses. Lol

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2017 10:30:00 AM

LOL...just a fairytale. My husband is a great gift giver not that I need them. He's just a romantic. We met each other on Valentine's day when I arrived at Navy A school. So we can't help but enjoy the whole Valentine SCHMALENTINE thing. :)

Darren White

Date: 1/31/2017 2:36:00 AM

Ohh, Kim, that last stanza! :D Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2017 8:37:00 AM

Thank you, Darren!

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/30/2017 9:39:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your fine win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2017 8:37:00 AM

Thank you, Afzal!

Joseph May

Date: 1/30/2017 9:37:00 PM

Congrats on your win Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2017 8:37:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph!

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/30/2017 6:56:00 PM

Wow...such a dark write, Kim...but pleased to read below that is was complete fiction! Perfect ending too! Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2017 8:30:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra! I guess a mind goes where it goes! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2017 8:30:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra! I guess a mind goes where it goes! :)

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/24/2017 11:35:00 PM

Nice take on the theme, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2017 8:34:00 AM

Thanks so much!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/22/2017 7:54:00 AM

Great write Kim. Enjoyed reading it immensely.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2017 8:04:00 AM

Thank you, Maurice! :)

Len Gasun

Date: 1/22/2017 1:27:00 AM

Amazing poem, my dear friend, Kim! Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest! Hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2017 7:42:00 AM

Thank you, Galeo! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2017 8:48:00 PM

oh wow, KILLER last verse, Kim. Valentine Schmalentine indeed! I am reading such good ones in this contest. How will I ever compete? Thanks again. What a surprise today!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2017 9:14:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! And your welcome! Always fun to see who won the contest after the judging :)