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Valentine Prospect

sappy valentine brown-eyed largesse broke my heart a little, too much— godspeed ahead…my sailor celebrates the day we met February 2022
David and I met 42 years ago on Valentine’s Day in Navy “A” school. He brought me to see the submarine trainer - awooga awooga (or gaga for short ;)
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Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 9:06 PM
this is just darling.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 4:30 AM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
George Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 4:34 AM
So rejoice true Valentines ! Celebrate your love all through the years especially on this Valentine's day ! Stay Blessed dear Kim !
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 6:12 AM
It’s a beautiful day because we met and built a lifetime together. Bless you, sweet poet!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 3:04 AM
A romantic love story. Congratulations on your anniversary. Have a lovely Valentines Day. I enjoyed your poem very much. Blessings xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 6:11 AM
Thank you, Connie!
Wolf Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 7:43 PM
Those colors 'sure bit' (sherbet) you! ~ WAVES of love!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 9:23 PM
We still love the sea :)
Brown Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 5:05 PM
Hi Kim, I love hearing stories of how couples get together. It's such a blessing when you hear happy stories. Congratulation, Kim. May you and your husband have many more happy years together. " Thanks for sharing the poem. Hugs~ Debra
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 9:36 AM
Thank you, Debra!
Pandit Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 11:28 AM
BIG congrats on love eternal, Kim. Happy Valentines Day.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 12:50 PM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
Proxenos Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 11:08 AM
Kim, snap, my husband proposed on the phone to me on Valentine's Day - we had been going for some time years ago, both got married to the wrong partner, and not each other, so he phoned me many years later, said its about time we got married, and so we did less than six months later! We celebrate the same amount of years knowing each other, but 21 years married. Love your poem Kim. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 12:53 PM
We got married two months later. Crazy, right?! But still we are together for a lifetime. Thank you for sharing, Jennifer. Hugs and blessings your way too xx
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