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Bitten by love bug, my heart swells with edema my love, like gnawing anxiety, burdens me. Like a knotty noose, stifles me Like a watch dog, follows me Like an inalienable shadow, always with me! When I turn around, it is right behind! It lingers in me like a lovely metaphor, like the intoxicating smell, of the first summer rain. In my world there are only two of us- You and I Wherever I go, the world wears your face. a face I have never seen, seen only from behind. I don’t know where you are now in which alien shore you dwell Yet I write this message, in secret code pouring out my longings, my unuttered love, my invisible desires, into this scroll of paper in cursive, indelible ink I seal it in a bottle with no address on and let it drift over the currents. It is meant for the one, who finds it and thinks it is for him. He is my Valentine! If you feel, it is not for you, please don’t throw it as garbage. Kindly put it back, and let my love vessel float, over eddies and currents because my soul is encased within! Just know this much: It is for my Valentine from a lovely lass- A blonde with golden hair! Jan. 18.2023 Valentine Poetry Contest Sponsor- Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 1/18/2023 8:39:00 PM
This voyage is so brave and hopeful, a daring desire for romance! Your verse is so eloquent, especially the fourth stanza, hope it's a winner for you~
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Date: 1/18/2023 12:48:00 PM
Thoughts that are endearing and sincere, a promise of love that is appropriate for the contest. You have my best wishes, Valsa.
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Date: 1/18/2023 5:19:00 AM
Endearing, heartfelt sentiments--a message of love--apt for the contest. Best to you, Valsa.
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Date: 1/18/2023 2:04:00 AM
Dear Valsa, you astound me with your verses. I saw a film once about a letter thrown into the sea. Pity my memory is at low ebb. I would love to see that film again. Meanwhile, I wish you the best in your contest.
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Date: 1/17/2023 10:11:00 PM
Interesting take on the theme, Valsa:)
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