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My My mother father fell in love fell in love and got married. and got married. He was her prince. He whispered love. They wanted a baby girl I was born in winter. Dad said that mom was the most beautiful girl in the world, as I grew up I saw that their love was always growing strong. Mom was his Valentine every single day and he was hers too, they were so suited to each other and their love was blessed, loving to cook together, watch TV, but dad was often asleep! Then, one day dad took the Lord's hand and left us, so much sadness, so much love just gone away, while I sang him a sweet goodbye lullaby. Oh, that song will haunt me ever! Then, mom left for heaven too, like a whisper- like a bird. Now, they are together, joined far up above, sweet Valentines. That will be, forever, now! * __________________________ January 16, 2023 Poetry/Shape/Valentine Copyright Protected, ID 01-1518-155-16 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Valentine sponsor, Mystic Rose Rose, Judged 01/19/2023 Third Place

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Date: 1/21/2023 9:08:00 AM
So nice. I am whelmed. Love.
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Date: 1/21/2023 4:11:00 PM
Aisha, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 1/20/2023 10:22:00 AM
Beautiful Constance, what a wonderful love your parents had. Congratulations on your win in the contest… Belle
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Date: 1/21/2023 4:11:00 PM
Belle, thank you so much for the visit, comment, compliment, and congratulations, Constance
Date: 1/19/2023 7:52:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem , celebrating your parent's 'Valentine' love. Unfortunately they couldn't enjoy it here for long. But in Heaven, they remain eternal Valentines. A beautiful dedication to your dad and mum, Constance. Congratulations on your great win.
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Date: 1/20/2023 8:32:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the visit, lovely comment, compliment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 1/19/2023 10:12:00 AM
You gave me more than roses, you gave me poetry of love. You stood out from the rest, guess you must be the best. Thank you, from my heart :)
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Date: 1/19/2023 11:51:00 AM
Mystic, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and my wonderful placement, and for the comment, and compliment, blessings Constance
Date: 1/16/2023 7:25:00 PM
Unique, unification creation, Constance! Bravo!
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Date: 1/19/2023 11:52:00 AM
Gershon, thank you so much for the visit, comment, and compliment, Constance
Date: 1/16/2023 4:52:00 PM
Beautiful story of love and great artistry in this
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Constance La France
Date: 1/19/2023 11:54:00 AM
Stephan, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, Constance

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