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Michelle Faulkner

Vague To Clear

Lost
Murky
Ashen smoke
Vanishing gaze
Vague

Muse
Striking
Silver chimes
Vision true, sharp
Clear.

3/02/19

For Light Up the Page contest
Sponsor: Joseph May

Copyright © Michelle Faulkner | Year Posted 2019

conflictcreationinspirationwritinglanterne

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Gregory Richard Barden

March 10, 2019 at 10:15 PM

A sincere congratulations on your win in Joseph's "Lanterne" contest, Michelle - blessings and best wishes, and keep that ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3

Michelle Faulkner

March 10, 2019 at 11:58 PM

Thank you!

March 10, 2019 at 8:29 PM

Congratulations, Michelle. Hugs Eve~`*

Michelle Faulkner

March 10, 2019 at 11:58 PM

Hugs to you as well, Eve!

March 10, 2019 at 6:27 PM

I can relate to this with my muse Michelle! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

March 10, 2019 at 11:56 PM

Yes, this is my creative process, thanks, Jan!

March 10, 2019 at 3:11 PM

Hi Michelle, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner

March 10, 2019 at 11:55 PM

Thanks, Alexis!

Constance La France

March 9, 2019 at 10:09 AM

Michelle, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win ~

Michelle Faulkner

March 9, 2019 at 3:17 PM

Thank you, appreciate it-

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 9, 2019 at 8:35 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem: Vague to clear, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Faulkner

March 9, 2019 at 3:17 PM

Thank you!

March 8, 2019 at 8:33 PM

Beautifully rendered- love this!! ;)

Michelle Faulkner

March 9, 2019 at 3:17 PM

Thanks, Rhona, happy to hear it!

Caren Krutsinger

March 8, 2019 at 6:32 AM

Your lost murky beginning lulled me into this poem so gently, but the striking of the silver chimes woke me up. Wow! Great job Michelle.

Michelle Faulkner

March 9, 2019 at 3:16 PM

So glad you like this, my friend!

March 7, 2019 at 2:36 PM

Good work for he contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Michelle Faulkner

March 9, 2019 at 3:16 PM

Thank you, Sara-

Andrea Dietrich

March 5, 2019 at 5:34 PM

You did a wonderful job. This is truly a lanterne poem!

Michelle Faulkner

March 5, 2019 at 9:06 PM

Thanks for your kind words, Andrea!

March 4, 2019 at 6:21 PM

WoW! Michelle, No comment will justify this well written piece. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Excellent job:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner

March 4, 2019 at 7:10 PM

Thank you for your wonderful comment, Alexis!

March 3, 2019 at 4:26 PM

A wonderful speed bump in a thought provoking poem....

Michelle Faulkner

March 4, 2019 at 7:11 PM

Much appreciated, thank you, john.

March 3, 2019 at 2:32 PM

Reads like your muse was smoking weed when a breath of fresh air came to your rescue! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico

Michelle Faulkner

March 4, 2019 at 7:12 PM

I think that comment says more about you than me, Rico!

March 3, 2019 at 10:46 AM

Illuminating forecast contined in this lantern(e)! G.L. in the contest, Michelle! :) gw

Michelle Faulkner

March 3, 2019 at 12:20 PM

Your comments always brighten my day, gw!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 2, 2019 at 9:24 PM

So cool! My tongue loved it. Good luck in the contest! xomo

Michelle Faulkner

March 2, 2019 at 10:45 PM

So happy you like it, Maureen!

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