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Vague To Clear

Lost Murky Ashen smoke Vanishing gaze Vague Muse Striking Silver chimes Vision true, sharp Clear. 3/02/19 For Light Up the Page contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/10/2019 10:15:00 PM

A sincere congratulations on your win in Joseph's "Lanterne" contest, Michelle - blessings and best wishes, and keep that ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/10/2019 11:58:00 PM

Thank you!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/10/2019 8:29:00 PM

Congratulations, Michelle. Hugs Eve~`*

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/10/2019 11:58:00 PM

Hugs to you as well, Eve!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/10/2019 6:27:00 PM

I can relate to this with my muse Michelle! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/10/2019 11:56:00 PM

Yes, this is my creative process, thanks, Jan!

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/10/2019 3:11:00 PM

Hi Michelle, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/10/2019 11:55:00 PM

Thanks, Alexis!

Constance La France

Date: 3/9/2019 10:09:00 AM

Michelle, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win ~

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/9/2019 3:17:00 PM

Thank you, appreciate it-

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2019 8:35:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem: Vague to clear, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/9/2019 3:17:00 PM

Thank you!

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 3/8/2019 8:33:00 PM

Beautifully rendered- love this!! ;)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/9/2019 3:17:00 PM

Thanks, Rhona, happy to hear it!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/8/2019 6:32:00 AM

Your lost murky beginning lulled me into this poem so gently, but the striking of the silver chimes woke me up. Wow! Great job Michelle.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/9/2019 3:16:00 PM

So glad you like this, my friend!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2019 2:36:00 PM

Good work for he contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/9/2019 3:16:00 PM

Thank you, Sara-

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2019 5:34:00 PM

You did a wonderful job. This is truly a lanterne poem!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/5/2019 9:06:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words, Andrea!

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/4/2019 6:21:00 PM

WoW! Michelle, No comment will justify this well written piece. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Excellent job:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/4/2019 7:10:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful comment, Alexis!

John Lawless

Date: 3/3/2019 4:26:00 PM

A wonderful speed bump in a thought provoking poem....

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/4/2019 7:11:00 PM

Much appreciated, thank you, john.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/3/2019 2:32:00 PM

Reads like your muse was smoking weed when a breath of fresh air came to your rescue! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/4/2019 7:12:00 PM

I think that comment says more about you than me, Rico!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/3/2019 10:46:00 AM

Illuminating forecast contined in this lantern(e)! G.L. in the contest, Michelle! :) gw

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/3/2019 12:20:00 PM

Your comments always brighten my day, gw!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 3/2/2019 9:24:00 PM

So cool! My tongue loved it. Good luck in the contest! xomo

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/2/2019 10:45:00 PM

So happy you like it, Maureen!