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Vague to Clear

Lost
Murky
Ashen smoke
Vanishing gaze
Vague

Muse
Striking
Silver chimes
Vision true, sharp
Clear.

3/02/19

For Light Up the Page contest
Sponsor: Joseph May

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Date: 3/10/2019 10:15:00 PM
A sincere congratulations on your win in Joseph's "Lanterne" contest, Michelle - blessings and best wishes, and keep that ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/10/2019 11:58:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/10/2019 8:29:00 PM
Congratulations, Michelle. Hugs Eve~`*
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/10/2019 11:58:00 PM
Hugs to you as well, Eve!
Date: 3/10/2019 6:27:00 PM
I can relate to this with my muse Michelle! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/10/2019 11:56:00 PM
Yes, this is my creative process, thanks, Jan!
Date: 3/10/2019 3:11:00 PM
Hi Michelle, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/10/2019 11:55:00 PM
Thanks, Alexis!
Date: 3/9/2019 10:09:00 AM
Michelle, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win ~
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/9/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thank you, appreciate it-
Date: 3/9/2019 8:35:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem: Vague to clear, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/9/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/8/2019 8:33:00 PM
Beautifully rendered- love this!! ;)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/9/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thanks, Rhona, happy to hear it!
Date: 3/8/2019 6:32:00 AM
Your lost murky beginning lulled me into this poem so gently, but the striking of the silver chimes woke me up. Wow! Great job Michelle.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/9/2019 3:16:00 PM
So glad you like this, my friend!
Date: 3/7/2019 2:36:00 PM
Good work for he contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/9/2019 3:16:00 PM
Thank you, Sara-
Date: 3/5/2019 5:34:00 PM
You did a wonderful job. This is truly a lanterne poem!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/5/2019 9:06:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Andrea!
Date: 3/4/2019 6:21:00 PM
WoW! Michelle, No comment will justify this well written piece. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/4/2019 7:10:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment, Alexis!
Date: 3/3/2019 4:26:00 PM
A wonderful speed bump in a thought provoking poem....
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/4/2019 7:11:00 PM
Much appreciated, thank you, john.
Date: 3/3/2019 2:32:00 PM
Reads like your muse was smoking weed when a breath of fresh air came to your rescue! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/4/2019 7:12:00 PM
I think that comment says more about you than me, Rico!
Date: 3/3/2019 10:46:00 AM
Illuminating forecast contined in this lantern(e)! G.L. in the contest, Michelle! :) gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/3/2019 12:20:00 PM
Your comments always brighten my day, gw!
Date: 3/2/2019 9:24:00 PM
So cool! My tongue loved it. Good luck in the contest! xomo
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/2/2019 10:45:00 PM
So happy you like it, Maureen!