Vagrant

Vagrant thoughts Hang about the corners Of my mind Idly tormenting each other Daring At least one To take hold Take shape Cast a shadow On the unknown. ©4/19/2023 Writing Contest - 'V' Words Poetry Contest Constance LaFrance - sponsor

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 4/28/2023 2:12:00 AM

I like this! Great take on the prompt.

Constance La France

Date: 4/24/2023 5:36:00 AM

John, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2023 8:16:00 AM

Awesomely done on the word Vagrant. So creative!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2023 3:04:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win, John :) -

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/22/2023 7:16:00 PM

Congratulations John:)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/22/2023 2:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a write. One needs to watch out for their mind. Have a blessed weekend.......

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/22/2023 11:31:00 AM

Hi John, Congrats on your win. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/22/2023 11:24:00 AM

My mind has a vagrant spirit also John. Congratulations on your win! :)

Valsa George

Date: 4/20/2023 7:25:00 PM

Vagrant thoughts keep coming. Only rarely do thy take hold. They just come and go. Great penning. The mischief of the brain is succinctly brought forth. All the best in the contest dear John.