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For Constance La France's Vanish, Voyage, Veiled, Vagabond poetry contest.

 

Poetry is like medication, in each release of expression, there is healing - Poet.
In the realms of lost childhoods, where demons prey upon the defenceless - no one hears your screams. I wandered spiritless, like an abdicated soul, renouncing my existence. But the pain kept me alive. I was an unknown vagabond, forgotten and begotten, within an eerie mist of misunderstanding. Sly shadows with crimson eyes tracked my silent sighs of sorrow, so I suppressed sincere secrets - too embarrassed to express. Until I fell upon verses from dead rhapsodists, which taught me to become that poem. With blessings from pseudonym poets, wounded words began to burn in metaphors. Ink engulfed in sizzling lava dripped in impulsive poetic allusions - expression led to a catharsis of clarity. I found an abode in decorative alliteration, a perfect province in personified prose, where each stanza became my sanctuary. Under the shelter of fervent free verse, I collected every shard of hope, and placed them in my heart. Sonnets of sentimental dwellings, revealed syllables of an untold narrative. The curse of Iambic pentameter could not prevent bleeding blisters from healing. My quill is now a silent juxtaposition of deafening poetic onomatopoeia.

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Date: 4/8/2024 6:31:00 PM
What a powerful write Silent One. I really do take my time to read your poems and process every beat and line. "so I suppressed sincere secrets too embarrassed to express." A lot of things have been caged just because we are not sure how people would handle it or if they can help us heal. Poetry is indeed a medicine and a bandage. I've resonated with a lot of poems in The Soup. The opening line got me so good. We still hope to heal our inner child so we can live the best of our lives. I hope.
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Date: 4/7/2024 2:50:00 PM
Silent, congratulations on your win in my contest with this exceptional poem, I like the quote too, hugs
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Date: 4/7/2024 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a powerful write/quote/great ending. Your gold pen was working overtime on this one.... Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 4/1/2024 4:32:00 AM
Don't think I'll enter that contest unless I copy yours. Even had to look up, onomatopoeia. Great write.
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Date: 4/1/2024 3:21:00 AM
This poem is unique and a great contender for the contest. So perfectly written.
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Date: 4/1/2024 12:51:00 AM
The poets quote is so awesome! You have penned another winner oh brilliant one! Great job and best wishes in the contest!
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Date: 3/31/2024 9:40:00 PM
To poetically find reason in thoughtful sift, shows itself, the process is the healing, reconciliation in the expression of re align, delve, empty the emptiness dis splayed demons feng shui ed on a shelf. Onomatopoeia-poetry, working through that mysterious narrative path of reasoning to display again true self.
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Date: 3/31/2024 6:31:00 PM
An unique take on the subject, this is- very powerful, raw lines
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Date: 3/31/2024 6:14:00 PM
SO, this poem details a journey of healing, which I enjoyed very much. I have to agree that the expression of what ails us is the basis of recovery from past abuses and mistreatment. What you do with words is remarkable, sir!
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Date: 3/31/2024 4:35:00 PM
enjoyed the metaphorical nature of your poem as you addressed the contest prompt. What extraordinary lines were these: wandered spiritless, like an abdicated soul, renouncing my existence. But the pain kept me alive. The last verse resonated with me on a soulful level. You have such an extraordinary talent, and I feel privileged to read your poems. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 3/31/2024 2:46:00 PM
renouncing my existence. But the pain kept me alive…within an eerie mist of misunderstanding…and too many other fantastic lines! You have a way with words, Poet!
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Date: 3/31/2024 2:12:00 PM
I loved everything except the curse of iambic pentameter. My mind practically subsists on iambic meter. Haha
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Date: 3/31/2024 2:12:00 PM
Great way to do the theme word metaphorically
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Date: 3/31/2024 1:10:00 PM
Evocative poetry and profound spiritual insight—a work of art. Words spoken by a poet from the depths of their soul are more than just words; they unveil a refuge. The diction, metaphors, and alliterations that you used to describe yourself were wonderful! Unlike anybody else, you always manage to make metaphors appear organic, with astonishing ease! Reading this made me feel the most, albeit I adore all of the words.
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Date: 3/31/2024 10:43:00 AM
Wonderfully evocative, S O, and BOL in the contest.
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Date: 3/31/2024 9:38:00 AM
A masterpiece of poetry, and spiritual revelation. Myself favoring Free Verse ~~ not that it is free, but in fact, poetry personified. We are poetry at our core and source...needing just to allow our natural rhythm-cycle's release. One must first learn all the rules, before breaking them. One must first lean man's dogma, our own need for relationship and guidance...and then meet God the original. Great poetry my friend! You get a FAV!
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Date: 3/31/2024 8:59:00 AM
words expressed from the heart of a poet are more than words, they are a sanctuary revealed...
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Date: 3/31/2024 7:44:00 AM
I like the use of poetic terms used in this one. Sometimes our lives are like the back of an embroidery piece that is in progress. It doesn't like much, but in the end it all comes together. Thank you for sharing it with us and for stopping by my page with congratulations. I hope this is the best Easter Sunday for you and yours ..Sara K
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Date: 3/31/2024 7:27:00 AM
What a great entry. I expect this will do very well.
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Date: 3/31/2024 6:15:00 AM
Silent One, so obvious it is to me that you found your voice through words! From the first time I came upon your work, I felt such deep yearning to be heard and your ability to communicate the depths of your soul is unmatched! Excellent entry! If you celebrate, Happy Easter!!
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Date: 3/31/2024 6:00:00 AM
This is so very clever and creative dear silent one, i think many can resonate, so many unheard souls, found their voice through poetry, and your journey youv expressed using such brilliant diction and metaphors, as well as alliterations! You always do alliterations so well in a seamless manner, unlike any other, you make them look natural! I love so many lines in this but i felt the most as i read “ I was an unknown vagabond, forgotten and begotten, within an eerie mist of misunderstanding.“that hit me so strong and deeply! As well as “ Under the shelter of fervent free verse, I collected every shard of hope, and placed them in my heart.
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Date: 3/31/2024 6:02:00 AM
Your way with words always leave me feeling so much! As they are not just words but soulful emotions, that youv designed with poetic lines! Pleasure reading your poem! Best wishes for the contest

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