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March 30.2024
Vanish, Voyage, Veiled,Vagabond Words Poetry Contest
Sponsor - Constance La France
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“Wandering through empty and crowded streets with no destination in sight and sleeping under the sky with the fire burning inside was my life, the life of a vagabond. Survival is a funny game and life is an endless odyssey for survival” ~ By Poet
Homeless, a wanderer all his life. An orphan, he was raised in the streets. Mongrel dogs and gypsies were his company. He had wild days and dolorous times. At nights, he curled up on street corners, Had brawls with other street children. But as he grew up, he began nursing a dream, To own a home and no more be a vagabond. He took up odd jobs and worked day in and out. Over time, against heavy odds A little hovel, he did build, In a verdant stretch of fertile land Off the noisy, frenzied crowd With sheaves of hay, he thatched its roof. With reed and bamboo, its walls were made. With mud and charcoal, its floor was glazed. With wooden planks, its entrance he laid. At dusk, when birds to their nests depart, And beasts, to their covert burrows and dens, After the day’s toil, weary and weak, He curls into the cozy comfort of his home. Through months and years, it gave him succor. Sheltered him from storm and rain. Made him differ from the gypsy tribe. Lent him a footing in this populous world. He wove around it many a dream. With frugal care, his needs he met. Like a squirrel stocking nuts and grains, In it's secret granary for the rainy days, He saved all that he had earned, For a life to be lived later in bliss. But alas! His haven lies so derelict! Its very foundation raced to the ground. The once beautiful stretch of land, Robbed of its greenery and grace! The eviction squad usurped his land, Hurling him down to the streets! Making him once again a vagabond… Bewildered, failing to budge an inch, Like a boat, midway stranded in sea, he stood. But his resilient spirits, to him affirmed, ‘Never defeated, though destroyed' Soon the mud hovel, to a palatial mansion turned. Where he envisioned himself as king of the land. His smiling progeny picking fruits from his orchard, And his cattle chewing cud in the shade of trees. Why scoff it as the fancy of a fevered mind? Oh! But to dream is every man's right.

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Date: 4/7/2024 2:53:00 PM
Valsa, congratulations on your win in my contest with this exceptional poem, I like the quote too, hugs
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Date: 4/7/2024 8:31:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Constance for the great placement you have given. Also for your kind words of appreciation.
Date: 4/7/2024 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Vagabond" is a powerful write/quote. Great Ending... Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 4/5/2024 1:18:00 AM
You are a great storyteller. Profound thoughts about life. We fight for survival. There is depth in your poem. Hugs.
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Date: 4/2/2024 7:23:00 PM
Thanks for sharing your beautiful gift with us all, in sharing teachings of life in poems
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Date: 4/2/2024 6:03:00 PM
Survivors sometimes end up as legends and stars, they endure so much they turn their plight into a beautiful story. I love the quote " Survival is a funny game and life is an endless odyssey for survival” true, you either take the bull's eye or give in. Lovely picture of the suffering and toiling of someone and his steadfastness. "Oh! But to dream is every man's right." Loved this too. The rich, poor, privileged and underprivileged what gives them a tie is the ability to dream. Great dear Valsa.
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Date: 3/30/2024 3:40:00 PM
An inspiring story of perseverance and the power of the human spirit in the face of adversity is told in this moving poetry. The story deftly depicts an orphaned guy who, despite his hardships, holds on to the hope of one day owning a home and finding security. It explores the depths of human resilience and the essential need of sustaining optimism even in the darkest situations through its expressive language. It is a powerful symbol of the fact that the human spirit can overcome apparently impossible obstacles.
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Date: 3/30/2024 10:29:00 AM
Nice poem with resolve to fulfill the dreams when facing hurdles in life. Love the quote.
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Date: 3/30/2024 6:24:00 AM
This poem tells a poignant tale of resilience and the enduring human spirit in the face of adversity. It paints a vivid picture of a man who, despite being homeless and orphaned, holds onto a dream of owning a home and finding stability. It's a powerful exploration of the human capacity for resilience and the importance of holding onto hope even in the darkest of times. It serves as a reminder that, no matter how dire the circumstances may seem, the strength of the human spirit can prevail
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Date: 3/30/2024 1:49:00 AM
Oh yes... dream. lovely writing. God bless you sweet friend., love to you always, Gina
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Date: 3/29/2024 11:42:00 PM
Dear valsa. What a deep and profound write this is, from the very first line, i was intrigued to read more and you drew me right in. I see a storyteller in you, and you do it seamlessly in such a poetic manner. And this story and character goes very well with the prompt that youv chosen and used here, clever, fitting and eloquent take. Especially love “Like a boat, midway stranded in sea, he stood. But his resilient spirits, to him affirmed, ‘Never defeated, though destroyed'” wow! Powerful! Fav
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