For Beach Poetry Contest, sponsored by Rob Carmack
He vacationed with his girlfriend in France, Where, on the beach, he averted his glance. Ignoring all the heat, He kept cool and discreet, While he carefully adjusted his pants. 'Twas praiseworthy how he tried not to look. He cautiously put his nose in a book. Big and itty-bitty, What he missed, a pity, Till his girlfriend said, "please help me unhook."
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