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Vacation

Vacation comes but once per year A real treat for my family and me Condos and water parks fit just fine American past times revisit again The Myrtle Beach sky coaster is calling Intentionally beckoning me to visit this year Other days the zip line would be my great thrill No more zip in my zingers, just lazy river floating

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/25/2011 11:16:00 AM
A perfect picture of summer - so pastoral.
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Date: 6/22/2011 4:08:00 PM
haha no more zip in my zingers eh? I went to Myrtke beach a couple times . very grand. Saw some awesome sand sculptures being done there before the tide would come in and simply wash that fabulous work away! this one was af God making the universe! thanks for the reminder and sharing your vacatrion with
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Date: 6/21/2011 3:31:00 PM
just luv Myrtle Beach, S.C. ..been there many times .. a huge golf mecca too.. with the men in my family .. oh... hope u enjoyed Doris.. so happy u are back at PS. luv.. missing u much..
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Date: 6/17/2011 9:54:00 AM
hi sister, am back and better
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Date: 6/12/2011 12:52:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..I hope that it was fun, fun, fun....Mom
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:52:00 PM
vacation i remember them, i use to take them at one time in my life. it is good if you can take a vacation. this was a great piece.
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Date: 6/2/2011 9:19:00 PM
I just noticed. Where have you been? Smile.
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Date: 6/2/2011 9:15:00 PM
Ahh. This one is a peace maker. Remember, after the vacation, back to work. And hope is around us. God Love.
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