v-shaped fluttered wings

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Written, July 25, 2024
For The Premiere Contest, “Collective Nouns”
Sponsor, Suzette Richards

v-shaped fluttered wings squabble of seagulls in flight loud squawk echoes joy

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Karen Croft

Date: 7/26/2024 7:19:00 PM

Beautiful senryu

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/26/2024 6:56:00 AM

Dear Sandra, How I loved this, Senryu! My family are shore kind of people and it is fun to watch the seagulls especially if they are hungry. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2024 4:08:00 PM

great imagery and I didnt know the collective noun - the certainly squabble for food! hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/25/2024 2:51:00 PM

Nice one, Sandra!