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Do you fear dying?
Have you breathed utter darkness
that tests your resolve?
The night is ghastly only
if you lose sight of Heaven.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2023 12:28:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Linda ... a lovely poem :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/19/2023 2:26:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise. Thanks for your warm words and congrats! :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/19/2023 9:32:00 AM

Hi Linda, You penned such a deep and thought-provoking write. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/19/2023 2:25:00 PM

Many thanks my friend. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/19/2023 8:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your contest win, Linda! You always offer words of wise advice. ~ Regards // paul

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/19/2023 2:25:00 PM

Thank you Paul. Don't want to offer ill advise! :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/19/2023 7:26:00 AM

Well penned Linda, Congrats on your win

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/19/2023 2:24:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. :)

Constance La France

Date: 4/19/2023 6:36:00 AM

Linda, thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Wonderful !

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/19/2023 2:23:00 PM

Thank you Constance. A fun exercise using vocabulary words. :).

Valsa George

Date: 4/19/2023 2:07:00 AM

Death becomes so frightening when we lose sight of Heaven. Rightly said . Congratulations Linda on your great win.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/19/2023 6:09:00 AM

Thank you dear Valsa. :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/18/2023 9:01:00 PM

A very beautiful poem in the form of Tanka, depicts the need of optimism. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/19/2023 6:09:00 AM

Many thanks Christuraj!

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 4/18/2023 7:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Linda Death and life are not friends. Nice poem

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/18/2023 7:28:00 PM

Thank you Alfonso!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/18/2023 2:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A creative Tanka write. Have a blessed day.................

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/18/2023 2:57:00 PM

Thank you dear Paula. hugs, Linda :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/18/2023 1:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your contest win, Linda. I liked the flow and rhythm, as well as your wonderful imagery.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/18/2023 1:53:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words and congrats Lasaad! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2023 12:45:00 PM

Imagine losing sight of all hope? It would be ghastly indeed. hope you got a win with this one, Linda

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/18/2023 1:52:00 PM

Thanks my dear Andrea! Yes, one of the second place placements. :)

Suzette Richards

Date: 4/18/2023 12:33:00 AM

A philosophical comment that has a comforting message. You did well with this tanka, Linda.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/18/2023 6:07:00 AM

Many thanks suzette - your comments mean a lot! :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/17/2023 10:58:00 PM

This is a very powerful and beautiful thought provoking tanka my dear poet friend Linda. I love and enjoyed immensely my dear poet friend. The ending lines are great truths. Thank you so much for this precious gem. Best wishes always my dear although it's already a winner in my book. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/18/2023 6:07:00 AM

You are kindness with your words Len my friend. Thank you for your sweet words! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/17/2023 7:27:00 PM

Any utter great thoughts tonight, Linda? (I could use a few). Thanks, gw

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/18/2023 6:06:00 AM

LOL. Thanks for brightening my day gw! laf

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/17/2023 3:32:00 PM

I do not fear dying but I have heaven in my sights:) Nice one, Alice.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/18/2023 6:05:00 AM

Thank you dear Daniel.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/17/2023 2:43:00 PM

Well worded Linda. Very pensive, not your usual self. It takes insight to be able to write dark as well as light. You nailed it my friend. G'd luck in the contest, this is unusual and a stand out, it should do well.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/18/2023 6:04:00 AM

You warm words are welcome this morning Wen! Thank you. hugs :)

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