Utopian Dream

I hold three rocks in my hand
Rolling them over and over and over
Leaving this reality behind, far behind

I feel the rocks leaving my hand 
As my eyelids begin to close
And I drifted off into my own little world
In the air the scent of a rose

I awoke to find a different world
Finding there had been a radical change
In the air there was still the scent of a rose
In my heart I felt so strange

Hatred famine and bigotry were gone
There was peace and joy and love
There were neighbors helping neighbors
Only blue skies up above

No more fear or anger
On war there was a ban
A world of human compassion
A brotherhood of man

There was universal acceptance
No damage to self esteem
I raised my eyes to heaven
Oh Lord let this not be a dream

God Bless those who suffer
Some day may your suffering cease
God bless those who search in vain
May you find love and peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/26/2011 7:52:00 PM
Hello, there Vince.. how are you... I like the way one can meditate and relax and take themselves to a safe zone free world... and the blessing from the mind is a much stronger gift than spoken words.. my mummy always told me... energy comes in many form... one is rotating 3 rocks to find yourself in mind control... love your Utopia... take care... p.d.
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Date: 3/18/2010 4:23:00 AM
Reading your poetry today has been a pleasure. I especially like this one. We should all put hatreds and selfishness aside and make the world you described a reality. Thank you for sharing your words. Keep writing. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/5/2010 8:16:00 AM
excellent write, like how you tie up the loose ends
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Date: 11/29/2009 6:47:00 PM
Wonderful write, Vince! Congrats on your success in Constance's contest! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/25/2009 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations Vince on your win in Constance's excellent contest >> James
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Date: 11/23/2009 12:41:00 PM
May your dream journey be a reality in the near future. Why does the world not learn that war is not the answer. A blissful journey you took. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 11/23/2009 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on this thoughtful poem...a world of peace..who could wish for more? And once again, I must add that my thoughts and prayers are sent to you and yours in this time of loss. Best wishes, Carrie
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Date: 11/22/2009 9:34:00 PM
Congrats, Vince, on your winning poem in the Magical Journey contest.. well deserved win for a wonderful write.. happy to share the shame stage with u... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/17/2009 10:48:00 PM
An excellent piece. A place I pray is not a dream. It sounds like heaven to me so it is a place I pray I'll see. Great luck to you in the contest. Love the rhyme and flow of this one. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 11/10/2009 12:09:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Vince & thank you for your welcome blog comments.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/9/2009 5:52:00 PM
yes! Vince! a lot of us are on the same path, today! jimbo
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Date: 11/9/2009 4:49:00 PM
a vision to pray for! good to have you back! Light & Love
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Date: 11/7/2009 4:58:00 PM
We all dream of the ideal and some day that will be true. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/7/2009 3:07:00 PM
If only this was reality, and not fantasy....I want to live in that magical world! Wonderful poem, wonderful message! ~ God Bless ...Carrie
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Date: 11/7/2009 12:06:00 PM
May we all find love and peace,and yes may God kiss away all's troubles and pain..excellent write..deep message-Charma
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