Utopia Poetry Contest, Hell and Heaven, March 28, 2017

UTOPIA POETRY CONTEST BY 03/28/2017

Hell cannot tell of its attractions, I assume
I searched for brochures on the internet
I even went to the Library of Congress last June!
Does heaven win merely by default?

But neither have I known any heaven –
Except those times in southern climes
When near Tugela river, I climbed mango trees with cousins
(They were not monkeys, only favorite relations).

I am reading an old book, now, called “Book”
It must be Greek to me, to you, and to everybody
“Libro” and “Libris” are familiar Latin roots
This old book does talk of freedom and liberty

To get free I would have to die, first – maybe twice
And I am no longer sure if I‘d been baptized
In the right places, the three times that come to mind;
Some say “You can be sure,” or “Once saved, always saved!”

From what? Perhaps they mean “hell” by contrast
But if I have to forgive enemies here, and live with them there, -
With no toilet paper, nor marriage, nor future and past …
It's time I began making heaven right now, right here!
© Anil Deo, 20170326

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/4/2017 3:40:00 PM
Not sure about supernatural stuff, but getting ripe mangoes right off the tree is one true pleasure on earth.
Login to Reply
Deo Avatar
Anil Deo
Date: 4/4/2017 8:08:00 PM
You are fair and even-handed. You qualify for that high honor of global citizen and "mensch." Thanks Doug; Paz/Pace/Shanthi/Salaam/kalmte/Vrede. Anil Deo
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter