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March.21.2024
Unadorned, Utopia, Utterly, Uplfting Words Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France
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" Imagine a place where there is beauty, bliss and plentifulness for all. It is nothing short of utopia. Though we are far from realizing it, isn't it thrilling to imagine a version of the world different from the existing one where all disparities will be leveled and happiness and freedom are made the birthright of all? Now such a world is enshrouded in mist. But who can say it won't emerge suddenly from the blue in some distant future"- By Poet
Though, utopia is merely an illusion, Or a chimera born in the womb of our whims, I shall take you to a near-utopian land, Where, peace and beauty blossom like the cherry in spring And trees grow like the cedars of Lebanon. Come on, my Love! Let us move to that land, Where the sun resurrects anew, Where darkness gives way to light, And life renews itself every morning. It is our dreamland paradise or interim utopia. Let us go into that Garden of Delight. Look to the East, my love, beyond those crooked hills, Where poplars grow tall in line And a gentle breeze susurrates through the foliage of leaves And wild weeds hem the edges of pathways, Where bunnies and squirrels hop and jump And run around whistling bamboo reeds, Where the laughing cataract leaps down from the rocks And flow along in silvery rills Where the languorous breeze plays upon the leaves. This place has all the beauty and bliss of utopia. Away from the tumult, far from the bustling crowd With the pandemonium of the world hushed to serene silence Let us walk together to that sequestered glade, Where we shall sit by the side of a rustling stream And dance across the flowery meadows. In this place of perennial greenery and sunlit groves We shall walk hands locked and hearts singing as one, Till the bright day gives way to a dusky night, Inhaling night air in scented perfume. Under the stillness of a star-spangled sky, we shall roam, Through moon-blanched woods, enigmatic and mysterious Listening to the sweet whisperings of our soul And ‘drinking life to the lees’ from the chalice of love Oh! Come on, let us not tarry…. Let’s move fast to that Utopia!

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Date: 4/7/2024 3:18:00 PM
Valsa ,congratulations on your win in my contest with this outstanding poem, I like the quote too, hugs
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Date: 3/28/2024 2:17:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Valsa :) - Beautiful poem :) - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
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Date: 3/26/2024 11:00:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful "Utopia" story/write/quote again. Enjoy your day/win..............
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Date: 3/26/2024 8:41:00 AM
Valsa, your "interim utopia" and place that has "the beauty and bliss of utopia" is insightful and enchanting. Without the real thing in sight, one can build it here and now, as your words express. Congratulations dear friend! :)
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Date: 3/24/2024 7:45:00 AM
Lovely imagery dear Valsa. "We shall walk hands locked and hearts singing as one." Love it. Nice entry.
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Date: 3/22/2024 7:51:00 PM
: ) beautiful my dear friend, with these cedars of Lebanon the temple or house built would just be the building for the true temple of God to dwell within, ( Spirit dwelling within the One in the house )
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Date: 3/21/2024 4:35:00 PM
wow, Valsa! Such exquisite words and imagery. I am mesmerized and found your poem enchanting. I liked so many lines but this one stood out for me: the laughing cataract leaps. Your poem touched me soul and created in me a desire to move to Utopia. Best wishes in the contest, hugs and blessings, Sara
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Date: 3/21/2024 1:30:00 PM
WOW!!! What a story/write/quote with a Great Ending. "Good Luck" Have blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 3/21/2024 1:06:00 PM
The poem's imagery of moonlit woods and star-spangled skies adds a touch of magic and romance to the scene, heightening the sense of enchantment and wonder. It invites readers to lose themselves in the beauty of the moment, embracing the transcendent power of love and nature. Its a captivating ode to the human imagination and the longing for a better world. Celebrating power of nature and love, escaping the confines of reality and journey to a place where dreams become reality.
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Date: 3/21/2024 11:15:00 AM
Dearest Valsa, golden poetess, you had my heart's imagination at "womb of our whims" and from there I whisked up and away on the elation, wonder and beauty of your transcendent verse. Your exceptional, animated, sensory imagery brings me to "that Utopia"! "Inhaling night air in scented perfume", I can smell the jasmine, I can feel the cool evening air, I can see the stars, I can hear the whispers and taste the nectar.. such is the power and persuasion of your gifted poetic pen. Glorious poetry! Your "star-spangled" talent shines, dear my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/21/2024 11:15:00 AM
JUST A BEAUTIFUL POEM, Valsa. I am speechless and hynotized. Thanks for sharing. My FAVE.
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Date: 3/21/2024 2:14:00 AM
so deep and beautiful, you binge light for everyone, with this artful poem, enjoyed so much my reading and hope brought aside, thanks a lot poet
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