Utopia

in this world of chaos and unrest, we long to drift away from it all... mentally to a place idyllic; unsullied to live in absolute harmony, but alas such place of... peacefulness remains an... illusion Writing Challenge - U words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Theme of choice: Utopia Form: Double Tricube Syllables checked at HMS Date written: 04/17/2023

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Alexis Y.

Date: 4/19/2023 8:50:00 AM

Hi Edward, I like how you composed this peace. You did a good job with the chosen word. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis

Constance La France

Date: 4/19/2023 6:01:00 AM

Edward, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge, so creative and beautiful congratulations !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2023 2:01:00 AM

- " we long to drift away" ... but, can't close my eyes to the truth, Edward - Lovely poem :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/18/2023 8:32:00 PM

Utopia is often an illusion. A very beautiful poem in a very unique form. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/18/2023 6:28:00 PM

Very nice Edward. Love the 'utopia' sprinkled through and the form as well. Congratulations on your win! :)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/18/2023 2:20:00 PM

A superbly crafted poem, Edward! Warmest congratulations on your win! The peace we seek lies in the cave of our heart, wherefrom desires arise and that too is the place where silence infuses bliss in permanence, renewing like our breath … if we be but still, free from clutches of ego spawned thought