Usebydate

when time is calling life a hired boat sailing till one runs aground. © Harry J Horsman 2014

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Joe Maverick

Date: 12/28/2014 10:33:00 AM

At first I thought I would 'skiff' over this lightly Harry But I think it best to keep an eye out for rocks and shoals take care..'

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/18/2014 3:06:00 PM

Beautifully written with loads of inspiration in this seryu! Bravo my friend!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/9/2014 2:55:00 PM

Very true, Harry! This great senryu makes a lot of sense. The thing is that we know the usebydate on products we buy, but we get to know ours only when time expires! // paul

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/7/2014 5:07:00 AM

Rent is paid in advance for hiring for certain time. Nicely said about time bound life. Genius piece. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/4/2014 10:04:00 PM

Fantastic, as a side note I tried putting a "useByDate" on my head, didn't work!!!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/4/2014 9:04:00 AM

Very powerful little gem! Sometimes the smallest ones pack the most punch.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/29/2014 11:40:00 AM

- Deep, powerful and touching Harry !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/29/2014 9:55:00 AM