Us

It should be me Plus you Me and you Only us Together But you will never love me You will talk to me You will hug me But we can never be Cant you see You love someone else Not me but I love you Us two Together as one In the midnight sun Would be perfect Maybe one day you’ll select Me as the one To love, Cherish, And hold Not now But only if it was.

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Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/3/2010 5:00:00 PM

wonderful words thank you so much for sharing with me my friend [duncan]

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 10/2/2010 11:26:00 AM

Hi Samantha I loved this poem of unrequited love. I found it sweet and yearning and enjoyable to read. Luv June(sylvia)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/2/2010 6:25:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Samantha. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/2/2010 6:23:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write today ..hope u will check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv...

Michael White

Date: 10/2/2010 5:50:00 AM

It seems like we all will experience this feeling sometime in life. Very nice.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/2/2010 5:43:00 AM

Very interesting and romantic thoughts on passionate love, samantha