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Urgent Call For Love

Urgent Call for Love The evil axis has been burning Who rules the land? It’s now very vague. The second son must get out of old Al Sham And meet the hungry jury in The Hague The puppet is hanging by his last string And the judgment day is sure to come Forty thousand martyrs will be singing As they join me in my urgent call for love. The war machine is pregnant and is bloated. Money births an icy, rigid son. He grows up in the muck of all this madness, It arms its addled brother with a gun. In my world, war is not an option, Let’s end the chaos with a silken glove Murdered angels soar among the heavens Please join me, in my urgent call for love. I’d love to build a mass market dart board With mug shots of the Senators and House I’d load it on an App and shoot the darts off With the quiet, perfect clicking of my mouse. How can these servants bow before their master? When Moses had already freed his tethered load? Make them testify before the one judge And answer to our urgent call for love Some years ago a scholar lost his lectern Because somebody stole my vote away He spoke his truth in defense of climate And was told let’s fix it later, not today When the perfect storm came a calling It blew our measured lives and hopes astray My Mother, here’s an olive branch and white dove I surrender to the urgent call for love. The pleading skies and rivers, they have warned us Their voices rose to wail their tortured song The veins of life, they have been all corrupted And darkness has been blinding us in fog. Insanity bathes in its make shift chambers It soaks in a vile and filthy marble tub. Please join in my call for our salvation, I am humbled, in my urgent call for love. Brenda Atry 1/1/2013 copyright pending

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Date: 5/17/2017 7:59:00 PM
Brenda Although the powers that be would have us all believe that 'LOVE' is on the defensive , this is not true. The reason Hate and evil is so prevalent today is, it knows it's days are numbered. LOVE conquers all. Very moving piece a 7 for sure Take care Brenda
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Date: 3/24/2017 5:10:00 PM
Wow, over 4 years since. Very nicely done, Brenda. : )
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Date: 3/14/2016 12:40:00 PM
brenda atry, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:43:00 PM
love it..SK
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Date: 4/27/2015 10:33:00 AM
You are in charge of your enviable pen. You skill is so refined. Continue sharing dear. 7+++!!!
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Date: 5/26/2014 11:54:00 PM
It has been too long since you have written anything? I hope all is well? Light & love
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Date: 5/26/2014 10:12:00 AM
A Beautiful piece of poetry, written magnificently and sublimely with flowing thoughts of inspiration and imagination.
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Date: 12/3/2013 2:21:00 PM
great and amazing poem .
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Date: 11/28/2013 7:04:00 PM
I hope you and yours are having a nice Thanksgiving, I miss you and your verse. I thought you were coming home to us? Light & Love
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Date: 11/6/2013 9:38:00 AM
I am with you, Brenda. I am so with you. I like the idea of a gigantic dartboard and the faces which make it up. Long ago the "governing" body in Washington have lost touch with the common man. They have elevated themselves above everybody else, and it is suicidal, because one day the masses are going too lose the restraint they have and it will not be a pretty picture in my way of thinking. A very good poem. One that give the reader a lot to think about.
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Date: 10/17/2013 7:53:00 PM
Loved your words that painted the picture of the decadence that surrounds society today..very poignant.
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Date: 10/16/2013 9:06:00 AM
A beautifully worded poem. Your words summed up the need for Love and Peace
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Date: 10/16/2013 5:34:00 AM
its great to read such work. great! (:v Jenish
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Date: 10/15/2013 7:30:00 PM
Amazing poem Brenda. I admire your thoughts. Love is the potion to cure the affliction of terrorism, bloodshed and strife. -Mohammad
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Date: 10/14/2013 3:39:00 PM
Nice and meaningful
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Date: 10/14/2013 1:29:00 PM
It alludes to some very relevant topics. It brings to my mind things like: clean air and environment, peace, and concern for community.
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Date: 10/14/2013 11:24:00 AM
Amazing poem brende really good
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Date: 10/14/2013 1:31:00 AM
i am impressed by both the theme and the style. the only wish, if it were intact in a shell so cute with brevity adornments! God bless, very inspiring, the diction is very promising. ' pleading skies, veins of life... .. no olive branch, nor any white dove would ever bring peace and prosperity, content and refinement, just ' apple vs bullet ' , my humble verses have the answer inevitable. God Bless.
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Date: 10/14/2013 1:05:00 AM
Hie Brenda. This is a well thought OUT and pain-stackingly written poem. Your call for peace and love resonates in our hearts! You're are an Ambassador for PEACE- allow me to call you as such! Thanks for sharing this gem! JM
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Date: 10/13/2013 11:30:00 PM
Meaningful poem. I love poems with a peaceful, and, or religious connotation.
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Date: 10/13/2013 9:49:00 PM
The message is clear. How can we rid ourselves of all of the confusion, turmoil and chaos. Things are so unstable and uncertain. Fear and abundant defense mechanisms are everywhere. There is only one thing missing though. Whose love should it be. God's love of course and naturally which was always meant to be. Oh, and God bless you being that He is the only one who can.
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Date: 10/13/2013 7:23:00 PM
Okies now you write a ghazal for me! Go back to my last blog and it will tell you how! I expect great things from you. Light & Love
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Date: 9/25/2013 5:49:00 PM
Fantastic as I have come to expect from you BUT you don't write enough! [at least not here for me to read!] I hope you ARE writing somewhere because your skill demands it. A Fan. Light & Love
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Date: 9/11/2013 9:01:00 PM
well done and clever...Linda
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Date: 5/9/2013 7:14:00 PM
beauttiful write....best wishes
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