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Urban Sonnet - Vanished

There he sat trembling, cowering in fright, Twilight's pall submerging shadowy form; His green eyes distinctive, piercing the night, Body arching with each drop of the storm. My wife signaled me: "Let's help keep him warm." She scooped him up, took him to our small dorm. Cats like to drink milk; he lapped up his bowl. Contentedly purring, stretching out s-l-o-w, The milk and the warmth restoring his soul. Smiling peacefully, our hearts aglow, We turned in for the evening, lights down low--- Our house guest all snuggly, from head to toe. Came the morn, bad news perched at our front door, The cat had vanished, no trace anywhere; Left us there crying, heartsick and heartsore. My wife looked at me: "It's too much to bear!" She fell to her knees, voice soft and so fair: "If it's all meant to be, why should I care?" Then as we gave up our last ounce of hope, In pranced the cat with a mate: He'd eloped! February 16, 2018

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Date: 2/21/2018 9:51:00 AM
great poem dear Gershon, happy to read your poem! thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 2/21/2018 8:29:00 PM
Thank you, Laura! Cheers! :) Gershon
Date: 2/20/2018 10:09:00 AM
Back with well deserved congrats, Gershon. Well done.
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Date: 2/20/2018 10:29:00 AM
Hey, thank you, Line!...And I see that you and I "held hands across the finish line this time, (both 5th placers). So congrats to you, too! No medals/trophies though...Next time, for sure!
Date: 2/17/2018 7:16:00 AM
Ha! Ha! - what a humorous ending to a very lovely sonnet. I Loved the poem and the twist ...Maria
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Date: 2/17/2018 8:33:00 PM
Thank you, Maria. I've got to get your poems now! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 2/16/2018 5:04:00 PM
What a cute end I g to the story gershon:-) Good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/17/2018 8:31:00 PM
Thanks! And glad you liked it...It's based on a true story, actually---with a bit of a s-t-r-e-t-c-h-e-r at the end, as Tom Sawyer might have put it. And thanks for your wishes. I need all the luck in these contests that I can get! :-) Gershon
Date: 2/16/2018 4:25:00 PM
Very romantic, Gershon. Quite the love story well woven into your daily lives. Those green eyes will win over every time. Adorable poem. Well done.
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Date: 2/17/2018 8:32:00 PM
Thank you, as always, my friend. Couldn't name the cat "Sinatra," of course---unless we had shined some blue lights at him. Best of everything, Gershon

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