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Uranium Glass

You looked straight through me. Never having felt more transparent Never having felt more solid. Your eyes, their radioactive colour, My favourite colour, Your sea shines through them, Cutting through their uranium glass. Tough, rare, to be cherished and protected. Those colours, your colours, hold it all. I see the waves of possibilities Whispering through them. You're so close, can't you hear. Low songs of sirens bouncing off the water. They're telling you to surrender to it.

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Date: 3/10/2025 12:31:00 PM
Dear Crystal, your striking use of imagery and metaphor captivates my heart and imagination. A fantastic piece with an intriguing hint of romantic risk. Congratulations for your success in Charlotte's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/9/2025 10:44:00 AM
"You're so close, can't you hear" this line really stands out to me. and the paradoxes described in the second and third line are very effective too.
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Date: 3/9/2025 9:36:00 AM
i thought this was an intriguing, haunting little piece; it made an impression on me upon first reading that stayed with me through subsequent readings - congrats on your win in my contest
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Date: 3/6/2025 4:28:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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