Upside Down World - Frigid Wife

There once was a snowman named Jerrit.
His wish was to embed his carrot.
So he stood on his head;
He could have stayed in bed.
If his cold wife would grin and bare it.



Written 1/1/2018
Contest:  Upside Down World (limerick)
Hosted by: Eve Roper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 8:16 PM
Dropping back to say many congratulations on your win and i'm relieved to see you've not been in hospital!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Tripp Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 9:28 PM
Hi Sweetie. Sorry I've been absent as of late. Last week was a zinger. So busy at work. I hope to get caught up with reading all my Soup friends posted writing. Also, I have to get my judging finalized. Thanks for stopping in. Hugs
Pett Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win with your very clever limerick Rhoda. :))
Tripp Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Thank you so much, Roy, for stopping by to read and comment. Very kind of you. I appreciate it.
Roper Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 6:09 PM
I love the trophy photo..
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 8:04 PM
Lol. Cool isn't it? Thank you, Dear.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 5:29 PM
Congrads on your win.Your poem is cute. Have a nice e vening my friend.
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Aww..Thank you, Dear!
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 3:48 PM
Congrats on your win, Eve. Well done.
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Thank you, Line. And touche. I called you a grandad, and you called me by the wrong name. Lol. Teasing you.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 12:59 PM
If you say to much you might get yourself on a pickle instead of in a pickle. Sorry I couldn't resist. "Bad Rick!" Congrats on your win. This is still one of the best in my humble opinion.
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:39 PM
LOL Riiickkkkkkk! You crack me up. Thank you for your kindness and humor.
Callus Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Back with congratulations, Rhoda! Your sense of humor merited this podium finish. Regards // paul
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 11:34 AM
Thank you so much, Paul. It was your help with rewording that made me be able to pull off a good placement and for that I am grateful. Your mentoring is paying off well.
Wigley Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 12:50 AM
Haha, well done, Rhoda! Viv x
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 11:32 AM
Thank you, Dear Viv. It was Paul Callus's help that got me a win.
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 9:10 PM
I sure remember this one. it was a well deserved win. Congratulations, Rhoda.
Tripp Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 9:16 PM
Lol. Thank you, Andrea! <3
Y. Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 9:04 PM
Hi Rhoda, Lol! Congrats on your 2nd place win:-) Alexis
Tripp Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 9:16 PM
Hi, Doll. Thank you, Alexis!
Roper Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 8:01 PM
Congratulations on your win, Rhoda, :) hum I'm the frigid wife Hugs Eve ~`*
Tripp Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 8:23 PM
Thank you so much, Dear Eve. Much appreciated. I'm getting out the trophy photo, lol.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 6:07 AM
This is a classic Rhonda! A delight that made me laugh with your clever humor. I hope this is a top winner! : )
Tripp Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Awww. Thanks, Connie. Much appreciated.
Kannan Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 5:00 AM
Ha ha ...Loved your fun write... Great one for the contest... Good luck in the contest...
Tripp Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Thank you my Dear Supraja. I'll get around to your poetry soon.
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 1:23 AM
aha, that is a great limerick,Rhoda.
Tripp Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 4:37 AM
Thank you, Andrea, Dear.
May Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 11:12 PM
Haha...Great limerick Rhoda
Tripp Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 4:36 AM
Thank you very much, Joseph
Horsman Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 11:01 AM
Ice cold every where, love the limerick, Rhoda.
Tripp Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 11:43 AM
Lol. Yes it is. Thanks for dropping in, Harry. Much appreciated.
Berggren Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 10:45 AM
-Your poem is terrific and the humor of it makes my day. The picture adds so much. Where did you find it?
Tripp Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 11:41 AM
Thank you, Alfred. I'm glad you liked it. The wonderful photo came with the contest. Check "upside down world" contest hosted by Eve Roper. You too can join the fun.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Ha ha, one of my favorites. Perhaps his wife prefers pickles to carrots. Or maybe she’s a peach preferring gal.
Tripp Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 11:40 AM
Hahahaha. Richard! Lol. Peaches! I could say so much more but I'd hate to get myself in a pickle.
Vaso Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 11:46 PM
One of the best limericks I have read in a long while! Hilarious!!!
Tripp Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 4:17 AM
Thank you, Arthur. Have a great day, Dear.
Martinez Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 9:20 PM
not sure how to comment on this but I do think it is quite unique for a snow man to embed his carrot.
Tripp Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 10:46 PM
Come to expect unique my friend and I hope to never disappoint! Thank you for stopping in, my friend.
Canerdy Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 8:23 PM
Funny, Rhoda! Janice
Tripp Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 10:44 PM
Thanks, Janice!
Thomas Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 8:11 PM
Lolol crazy woman! Good one!
Tripp Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 10:44 PM
Ha! Thank you...yes, I'll accept that adjective! Lol.
Callus Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Your play on words elicited more than one laugh, Rhoda:) Jerrit must be a disappointed and frustrated snowman! Regards // paul
Tripp Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 2:39 PM
Thanks, Paul. It was a fun contest and I've never erased more in my life trying to write five lines, lol. I'm glad I was able to inject some humor into your day. I've been working on judging the "Five Letter Words" contest...man oh man. Tough call! Now I know why so many people have several first, second and third place winners. Lesson learned, lol.
Godwin Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Naughty, naughty, clever, clever - you did so well with this endeavor! I cannot write limericks without my brain going cross eyed. Don't know the why, just the can't. You did oh so very well! All the best, naughty one ... CayCay
Tripp Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Lol. CayCay. I adore you. Limericks are a love of mine because I get to be naughty with good cause. ;)
One Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Good one Rhoda...
Tripp Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 11:54 AM
Thank you, Silent. Much appreciated.
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