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Upset of Falling

The all-too-tall set of stairs, straight up from the front door; upset of falling, the slipping, tumbling, scares the fist to hang tight the rail, take your time descending in lack of light, except for the landing’s chandelier. Enter the ominous mirror - the vanity oval swallows the queen-sized bed; nightmares end up in another world, another time. As we were playing cards, the painting fell with heavy breath and breadth onto the table; not my first fallen piece of art. This Ursuline happening, its unseemly content, spooky… or spooked by our united goodness. I slept soundly, as the painting leaned on the other side of the French doors and the mirror haunted my sister’s sleep. Spent by heavy limping, sweating profusely, wandering the French Quarter, munching beignets, relishing shrimp creole, and more. My shadowy figure moved in the space scaring my sister half to death, “Is that you…?” With arms bobbing, I say, “Ooooh…” So I scared her. We laughed. A couple days later she had to remove my shoes and socks, help me into bed, slide pillows under my feet. At least I didn’t fall down the mansion stairs. and leave, in wake, another Orleans ghost.

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Date: 8/19/2024 1:00:00 AM
Well done. The good thing about falling is...once one hits bottom, there is no where else to go but...Up...! And when we look up...His Outstretched Hands are always extended, amen. Thank for sharing, Kim. luv~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2024 9:40:00 AM
I like you already, Joyce! I see your heart is for the Lord, our God! Blessings! :)
Date: 8/7/2024 11:09:00 AM
Whoa, I am with some other poet's comments- ready for "Fall"- immaculate writing, Kim! <3 xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2024 5:55:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! :)
Date: 8/6/2024 10:51:00 AM
Wow! How mysteries love this very much
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/6/2024 1:55:00 PM
Thank you, Joyce!
Date: 8/5/2024 11:04:00 PM
Sounds like you had a spooky time Kim. Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/6/2024 3:59:00 AM
Been doing a lot of travelling of late, there's been no stopping me since I had my Spinal op. Hope you're keeping well too.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/6/2024 3:29:00 AM
A little bit…lol! Hope you are doing well, Tom!
Date: 8/5/2024 6:46:00 PM
A good poem that has me looking forward to October. I hope your trip was uneventful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2024 7:41:00 PM
We had a nice time. Celebrated birthdays for my sis and her friend. We were 9 ladies.
Date: 8/5/2024 3:16:00 PM
Thank Alex Bevins for that! This is a wacky, fun, all over the place write
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2024 4:22:00 PM
LOL…thank you, Tom! I appreciate you!

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