Upset of Falling

The all-too-tall set of stairs, straight up
from the front door; upset of falling,
the slipping, tumbling,  scares the fist
to hang tight the rail, take your time
descending in lack of light, except for
the landing’s chandelier. Enter

the ominous mirror - the vanity oval
swallows the queen-sized bed; nightmares
end up in another world, another time.

As we were playing cards, the painting fell
with heavy breath and breadth onto the table;
not my first fallen piece of art. This Ursuline
happening, its unseemly content, spooky…
or spooked by our united goodness.

I slept soundly, as the painting leaned
on the other side of the French doors and
the mirror haunted my sister’s sleep.

Spent by heavy limping, sweating profusely,
wandering the French Quarter, munching
beignets, relishing shrimp creole, and more.

My shadowy figure moved in the space
scaring my sister half to death, “Is that you…?”
With arms bobbing, I say, “Ooooh…”

So I scared her. We laughed. A couple days later
she had to remove my shoes and socks,
help me into bed, slide pillows under my feet.

At least I didn’t fall down the mansion stairs.
and leave, in wake, another Orleans ghost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Bell Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:00 AM
Well done. The good thing about falling is...once one hits bottom, there is no where else to go but...Up...! And when we look up...His Outstretched Hands are always extended, amen. Thank for sharing, Kim. luv~
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 9:40 AM
I like you already, Joyce! I see your heart is for the Lord, our God! Blessings! :)
Hind Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 11:09 AM
Whoa, I am with some other poet's comments- ready for "Fall"- immaculate writing, Kim! <3 xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 5:55 PM
Thank you, Paige! :)
Faure Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 10:51 AM
Wow! How mysteries love this very much
Rodrigues Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 1:55 PM
Thank you, Joyce!
Cunningham Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 11:04 PM
Sounds like you had a spooky time Kim. Tom
Cunningham Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 3:59 AM
Been doing a lot of travelling of late, there's been no stopping me since I had my Spinal op. Hope you're keeping well too.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 3:29 AM
A little bit…lol! Hope you are doing well, Tom!
Greenhough Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 6:46 PM
A good poem that has me looking forward to October. I hope your trip was uneventful.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 7:41 PM
We had a nice time. Celebrated birthdays for my sis and her friend. We were 9 ladies.
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