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Abandoning yesterday, Time morphs into tomorrow. While uprooting dying dreams, watered with tears of sorrow. Love's no longer on the scene; turning my dreams into dust. And though tethered to my heart, trust has eroded to rust. Paradise is a desert when the wind whispers your name. For it reminds me you left, and now nothing feels the same. Tattered, dried-out memories tend to crumple at my touch. And blow away with the wind, not counting for very much. The sun continues to shine, and the sky is just as blue. But my reason for living disappeared, along with you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/26/2018 8:17:00 PM
Lovely, touching, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/27/2018 7:43:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/2/2016 1:05:00 AM
I am sorry for you Emile ..
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/2/2016 8:18:00 AM
Then Cheers... you're a great writer my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/2/2016 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Pashang, but there is no need to feel sorry for me... this is fiction... I write on what I see, not aimed at anyone specific but a general observation of life. Emile.
Date: 2/1/2016 5:54:00 PM
Reminds me of songs with the same thing such as "Yesterday" by the Beatles. Moving work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/1/2016 6:15:00 PM
Thanks Matthew, your comments are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 2/1/2016 1:17:00 PM
Your words almost made me weep. Very sentimental, Emile....I relate.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/1/2016 3:30:00 PM
Thanks Lin, your comments are welcome and your visits are truly appreciated. Emile.

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