Premiere Contest WinnerUpon the Ground

Upon the ground

(To be sung to the tune of “As Time Goes By” from the movie “Casablanca”) 

In this October mist
I know you must insist
The leaves will fall around
In colors right before your eyes
Upon the ground

The temperature will chill
These sunny days so still
A pumpkin patch you will be found
They grow along a vine of green
Upon the ground

Pine cones and scarecrows
Wreathes upon the gate
Warm sugar cookies
Resting on a plate
Scarves plaid and woolen, oh we cannot wait
For autumn’s wondrous sound

The gardens now are bare
Though still a smile we share
This season always does astound
Our footprints as we walk we leave
Upon the ground



For the: Change the Record Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Natasha L. Scragg
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Allison Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 2:00 PM
a joy to read Chris I love the original song and your lyrics, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 7:10 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on this win. I love this beautiful write. Have a blessed day...................
Watt Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 11:43 PM
Lovely lyrics of the season set to a timeless classic. Big congrats for your top placement, Chris - well deserved.
Jones Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 6:43 PM
Back to say congrats on your 1st place win!
Scragg Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Dear Chris, congrats on your win. I loved how gentle this song was. It's in perfect sinc with your selected tune too. Thank you for taking part in the contest. A truly enjoyable entry. :-D Well Done!
Green Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 7:06 AM
Thank you so much Natasha. I am happy you liked it. It was fun contest to write for.
Hamilton Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Wow Chris this is a beauty, congrats on POTW, a deserved winner!
Green Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 2:33 PM
Thanks so much John. I appreciate you stopping by
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October 5, 2021 at 1:40 PM
WoW! Chris, You've penned a great entry for the contest. October is represented well in this lovely song. I can hear the melody in my head. Excellent job. Best wishes in the contest. Congratulations on getting the poem of the week it was well deserved:-) Alexis
Green Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 2:32 PM
Thank you my friend. I am happy you liked it.
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October 5, 2021 at 11:51 AM
A lovely song/poem for autumn Chris, congratulations on poem of the week… Belle
Green Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 2:32 PM
Thank you for your kindness
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October 5, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Oh so beautiful! Congratulations on your POTW. It's such a great song for October! BW ~ Mala
Green Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 2:32 PM
Thank you so very much.
Jones Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 7:37 PM
Fascinating how easily your words flow. Another great write! Good luck in the contest!
Green Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Thank you so very much Karen. I appreciate your visit and nice words.
Roper Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 9:32 AM
Wonderful imagery for the month of October, Chris.
Green Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 1:49 PM
Thank you so much Eve
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 9:10 AM
You make the season come alive in vivid fall colors in this lovely lyrical poem Chris. I loved it! Congratulations on having it honored with POTW! Blessings xxoo
Green Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Thank you so very much Connie
Goldsmith Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 9:08 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I love this beautiful October/Autumn write. Your "Warm sugar cookies" sure sound great. Have a blessed day/week..................
Green Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Thank you Paula.
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October 4, 2021 at 9:06 AM
Chris, absolutely beautiful and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE WEEK enjoy the honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Green Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Thank you so much my friend.
Strand Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 9:06 AM
The lyrics work well Chris with the great melody
Green Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Thanks a bunch Brian
Ball Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Wonderful Chris. This is a winner for sure. Been trying myself to come up with a Beginning of October poem and you have done that with a flare. God Bless, JB
Green Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Thank you so much Judy
Allison Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 2:59 AM
what a beautiful poem many congrats on POTW Chris:-) hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Thanks a bunch Jan
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October 3, 2021 at 10:32 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your well deserved POTW. Enjoy the honour and week
Green Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Thank you Rama.
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October 3, 2021 at 7:08 PM
"Warm sugar cookies resting on a plate" Mmm, my favorite. You paint such beautiful images with your words. Autumn is a lovely season indeed. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Brandy
Green Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Thank you Brandy.
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October 3, 2021 at 3:17 PM
I absolutely love this one. It is so uncomplicated and a wonderful fall poem/song. POTW!!! Wow, Congrats
Green Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Thanks a bunch Andrea
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October 3, 2021 at 2:13 PM
Chris, congratulations on POTW! Love the festive imagery!
Green Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Thank you Tania.
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 2, 2021 at 11:18 AM
I love this, warm and cozy. I love the autumn.
Green Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Thanks so much BJ
Sands Avatar
October 2, 2021 at 8:39 AM
This is beautiful and comforting Chris! A fave for me. Well written. Take care. :)
Green Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Thank you so much Heidi
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October 1, 2021 at 11:22 AM
Hello Chris, I am sorry i can recall the song. Love, Peace.& Joy Darlene.
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October 2, 2021 at 11:27 AM
Hello Chris, I hope all is well with you. You are welcome my friend. Love& Joy, Darlerne
Green Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 3:23 PM
Thank you Darlene.
Woodrow Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Nice one but i just can’t recall the song right now as all I remember of casablanca are Bergman and Bogart in black and white standing by a plane :)
Green Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 9:16 AM
We'll always have Paris. : )
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