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A ridiculous sight for all to see in my tacky sweater of Charlie Brown, sitting nervously upon Santa's knee. This shouldn't be, except my friends dared me; a full-grown man acting more like a clown, sitting nervously upon Santa's knee. Santa's too jolly, ignoring my plea, embarrassed, I start struggling to get down, a ridiculous sight for all to see. When my friends start laughing, I want to flee, my smile's instantly replaced by a frown sitting nervously upon Santa's knee. Holding me tight with a sly look of glee he offers to take me out on the town, a ridiculous sight for all to see. His Santa suit's dirty; it smells like pee and I no longer want to stick around. A ridiculous sight for all to see, sitting nervously upon Santa's knee. (Villanelle) 12/21/2016

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Date: 10/7/2021 7:09:00 PM
This is super funny, Emile. I'm still laughing. And it did make such a delightful villanelle. Loved it!
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Date: 10/8/2021 8:13:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, as always your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/7/2021 3:42:00 PM
lol what a vivid scene you set and that final stanza had me chuckling, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/8/2021 8:13:00 AM
Thanks, Jan, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/7/2021 8:16:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this delightful poem ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 10/7/2021 11:04:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/15/2018 7:41:00 PM
An adult Christmas nightmare, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/16/2018 8:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Line, your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.

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