Upon Her Windowpane

Through dreamy eyes of green she drifts away To fields of daisies there above the bay Beneath a silver veil of ocean mist Lost in the endless bliss of that first kiss As heaven weeps upon her windowpane Written: May 15, 2014 Inspired by a photograph by: Andrada Misca and A song by Deborah Henson Conant - the Nightingale played on a Harp - Truly one of the most beautiful songs I have ever heard

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Date: 5/26/2014 6:58:00 AM
truly captures the heart and soul... poignant & beautifully crafted, elaine.. sweet congrats and huggs
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Date: 5/24/2014 11:02:00 PM
Great words Lainie ......Seren
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Date: 5/24/2014 8:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
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Date: 5/24/2014 2:32:00 PM
We had almost the same idea for this contest, with a metaphor of tears for the raindrops.... I really enjoyed your beautiful poem, Elaine. Nicely done! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/23/2014 9:37:00 AM
Just captures the moment with such softness, so beautifully. Yes, I agree, the most beautiful music to inspire us...I loved that piece! Congratulations to matching words to music so perfectly!
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Elaine George
Date: 5/23/2014 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Carrie, for your kind words. Lainie
Date: 5/22/2014 8:06:00 PM
I love the last line...congrats on your win
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Date: 5/17/2014 4:46:00 PM
Dear Lainie, Yes, the picture did seem quite sad and you have created a beautiful poem to accompany both the image and the music. Wishing you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/17/2014 8:40:00 AM
Simply a real gem Elaine! Faving this! Always, Keith
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Elaine George
Date: 5/17/2014 6:23:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poetry, Keith, and honoring me by choosing it as a favorite...that means so much to me. bfn Lainie
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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 5/17/2014 10:42:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 5/17/2014 5:43:00 AM
Enjoyed good.
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Elaine George
Date: 5/17/2014 7:16:00 AM
Thank you for your comment, Muhamma. Lainie
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