Elaine George Poet Verse

Upon Her Windowpane

Through dreamy eyes of green she drifts away 
To fields of daisies  there above the bay
Beneath a silver veil of  ocean  mist 
Lost in the endless bliss of that first kiss
As heaven weeps upon her windowpane




Written:  May 15, 2014

Inspired by a photograph by: Andrada Misca and
A song by  Deborah Henson Conant  - the Nightingale played on a Harp - 
Truly one of the most beautiful songs I have ever heard 

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Nette Onclaud May 26, 2014 at 6:58 AM truly captures the heart and soul... poignant & beautifully crafted, elaine.. sweet congrats and huggs

Seren Roberts May 24, 2014 at 11:02 PM Great words Lainie ......Seren

Pandita Sietesantos May 24, 2014 at 8:38 PM Congratulations on your well-deserved win!

Kelly Deschler May 24, 2014 at 2:32 PM We had almost the same idea for this contest, with a metaphor of tears for the raindrops.... I really enjoyed your beautiful poem, Elaine. Nicely done! Congratulations on your win!

Carrie Richards May 23, 2014 at 9:37 AM Just captures the moment with such softness, so beautifully. Yes, I agree, the most beautiful music to inspire us...I loved that piece! Congratulations to matching words to music so perfectly! Elaine George May 23, 2014 at 9:50 AM Thank you Carrie, for your kind words. Lainie

Joseph May May 22, 2014 at 8:06 PM I love the last line...congrats on your win

Carolyn Devonshire May 17, 2014 at 4:46 PM Dear Lainie, Yes, the picture did seem quite sad and you have created a beautiful poem to accompany both the image and the music. Wishing you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Keith O.J. Hunt May 17, 2014 at 8:40 AM Simply a real gem Elaine! Faving this! Always, Keith Elaine George May 17, 2014 at 6:23 PM Thank you for reading my poetry, Keith, and honoring me by choosing it as a favorite...that means so much to me. bfn Lainie Muhammad Safa Thajudeen May 17, 2014 at 10:42 AM Thanks

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen May 17, 2014 at 5:43 AM Enjoyed good. Elaine George May 17, 2014 at 7:16 AM Thank you for your comment, Muhamma. Lainie