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Upon Ego Death

ethereal drums the sound of one hand clapping ~ silent bliss thunder pause at each half breath dwelling in thought cessation ~ we become the flame 03-June-2023 ___________ Show Don't Tell, Tell Don't Show Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dilly Dally

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Date: 6/12/2023 11:09:00 AM
I loved the way this allowed the message to be clarified - excellent comparison. Congratulations on your placement and thank you for taking the time to support this contest.
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Date: 6/12/2023 5:08:00 PM
Thanks for hosting, DD and for the placement. :)
Date: 6/12/2023 10:10:00 AM
Seeker, as ever, I'm never surprised to see your creations on a winning list.
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/12/2023 10:32:00 AM
Not so much an indulgence as respect. ;-)
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Date: 6/12/2023 10:14:00 AM
Ah! Friends indulge me :)
Date: 6/12/2023 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Heavenly-US xoxo
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Date: 6/12/2023 10:14:00 AM
Thank you, Anaya :)

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