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Upon a Meadow

Upon the meadow where you were born, I make a vow to stay by your side, And though my heart in anguish is torn, Tear-filled eyes remember our last ride. You breathe hard as you lay in the grass. Your heart beats like the thunder of earth. In its own time, life will let you pass To look for the mare who gave you birth. Reins are hung on a hook in the byrne. Your stall is empty. It leaves me forlorn. I, the pupil, from your strength did learn The joy of life the day you were born. Your body once hot, now becomes cold. The sun fades as the clouds become thicker. Good-bye, my friend. Our rides made us bold. Just nicker once more, softly nicker ....softly nicker...

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Date: 5/24/2025 10:23:00 AM
Lovely, heartfelt write. I thought of Trigger, Rodger's beloved ride, how Roy loved his pal of many years blessed together. They are special creatures, long a part of man's community of treasured affections.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/24/2025 2:16:00 PM
You are correct on how horses have always been a part of man's community. I have many more horse poems to write. Thank you.
Date: 5/22/2025 1:34:00 AM
A wonderful, if sad poem. Great rhyme, a bit difficult for me. Still I always look forward to read and enjoy your brilliant poems.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/22/2025 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, Victor.
Date: 5/18/2025 12:54:00 PM
Hilda, this is such a tender, beautifully mournful tribute--it stirred something deep in me. The imagery is so vivid: the empty stall, the reins on the hook, the fading warmth… it all builds to that haunting, gentle plea--“softly nicker.” You’ve captured the profound bond between soul and steed with grace and reverence. A stunning elegy.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/18/2025 4:59:00 PM
I appreciate your comment. I've lost many pets over the years. It is always painful.
Date: 5/15/2025 10:56:00 PM
I meet you via my poem, To Fly, so I came to visit. You are a writer, this one poem tells me you have 'it.' I had to clinch my emotions tight or else I would have started crying because I could feel the emotions of love, loss and the formation of bittersweet memories to be lifelong felt. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/16/2025 8:31:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/14/2025 2:14:00 PM
Powerful poem Hilda and sad. You lost a good friend.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/14/2025 7:56:00 PM
I appreciate your comment. Thank you.
Date: 5/14/2025 12:37:00 PM
Heart breaking poem. So beautiful even if sad. Deserves recognition.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/14/2025 1:16:00 PM
Thank you for commenting. Death of pets is difficult. It's always sad.
Date: 5/13/2025 7:06:00 PM
Portrayed so well through the eyes of this horse. Wonderful write, Hilda.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/13/2025 7:59:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/13/2025 12:45:00 PM
Dear Hilda, Your poem "Upon a Meadow" is truly touching! The vivid meadow imagery and heartfelt bond shine through, especially in lines like “Tear-filled eyes remember our last ride” and “softly nicker.” Thank you for sharing such a moving tribute! Best, Kjeld VK
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/13/2025 1:54:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem. I appreciate your comment.
Date: 5/13/2025 6:03:00 AM
- A deeply moving farewell to a faithful friend, Hilda - hugs
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/13/2025 6:57:00 AM
Thank you. I'm always glad to hear from you.
Date: 5/13/2025 12:12:00 AM
Hi Hilda, this is quite touching.... the final hours of a horse. Parting from a companion, be it an animal or human being, is always painful.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/13/2025 6:55:00 AM
Yes, it is a circle of life. It's good to have poetry to find expression. Thank you for your support.
Date: 5/12/2025 10:43:00 PM
This is beautiful! Deeply touching! Good you had such a dear companion, to cherish in your heart for always. Alive yet in your beautiful poetry.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/13/2025 6:53:00 AM
Thank you for your comment. I'm glad to hear from you again. Have an enjoyable week.
Date: 5/12/2025 10:23:00 PM
A loved animal can become part of you and losing it can feel like losing a family member. Such a poignant write Hilda. Cheers - Gary
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/12/2025 10:32:00 PM
Your comment is true. I thank you for reading my poem.
Date: 5/12/2025 7:57:00 PM
Your heartfelt, moving poem is beautifully composed, Hilda. So sorry for your loss.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/12/2025 8:00:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/12/2025 1:11:00 AM
Dear Hilda, sweet poetic soul , its always so good to read you and to see you post here on soup and this is such an evocative poignant poem that flows in such beautiful cadence! I felt the emotions in this soulful poem especially the ending made me sigh! Definitely a fave for me! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/12/2025 5:32:00 AM
Thank you. Your opinion is cherished. My life has been filled with animals. Sadly, all but the cat I have now, have died. I appreciate the fav. I wish you a glorious summer.
Date: 5/12/2025 1:07:00 AM
He is dead and his stall now empty....a touching poem.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/12/2025 5:27:00 AM
Thank you for your comment.
Date: 5/12/2025 12:34:00 AM
What a tender touching tribute Hilda! It is sad but beautiful!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/12/2025 5:27:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/11/2025 8:17:00 PM
Touch tribute to your horse companion.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/11/2025 8:50:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/11/2025 12:24:00 PM
Wow, this is so touching, Hilda. I love love love this, going right into my favs - <3
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/11/2025 2:53:00 PM
I am honored that you like my sad poem. Losing a beloved animal has always been difficult. Thank you for the fav.
Date: 5/11/2025 10:16:00 AM
Hello Hilda, this is a very touching and heartfelt write. So sorry for the loss of your riding companion. Sending prayers your way, my friend.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/11/2025 10:44:00 AM
Thank you for your comforting words. May the sun shine upon you.

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