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Upon a Meadow

Upon the meadow where you were born, I make a vow to stay by your side, And though my heart in anguish is torn, Tear-filled eyes remember our last ride. You breathe hard as you lay in the grass. Your heart beats like the thunder of earth. In its own time, life will let you pass To look for the mare who gave you birth. Reins are hung on a hook in the byrne. Your stall is empty. It leaves me forlorn. I, the pupil, from your strength did learn The joy of life the day you were born. Your body once hot, now becomes cold. The sun fades as the clouds become thicker. Good-bye, my friend. Our rides made us bold. Just nicker once more, softly nicker ....softly nicker...

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Date: 5/12/2025 1:11:00 AM
Dear Hilda, sweet poetic soul , its always so good to read you and to see you post here on soup and this is such an evocative poignant poem that flows in such beautiful cadence! I felt the emotions in this soulful poem especially the ending made me sigh! Definitely a fave for me! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/12/2025 5:32:00 AM
Thank you. Your opinion is cherished. My life has been filled with animals. Sadly, all but the cat I have now, have died. I appreciate the fav. I wish you a glorious summer.
Date: 5/12/2025 1:07:00 AM
He is dead and his stall now empty....a touching poem.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/12/2025 5:27:00 AM
Thank you for your comment.
Date: 5/12/2025 12:34:00 AM
What a tender touching tribute Hilda! It is sad but beautiful!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/12/2025 5:27:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/11/2025 8:17:00 PM
Touch tribute to your horse companion.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/11/2025 8:50:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/11/2025 12:24:00 PM
Wow, this is so touching, Hilda. I love love love this, going right into my favs - <3
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/11/2025 2:53:00 PM
I am honored that you like my sad poem. Losing a beloved animal has always been difficult. Thank you for the fav.
Date: 5/11/2025 10:16:00 AM
Hello Hilda, this is a very touching and heartfelt write. So sorry for the loss of your riding companion. Sending prayers your way, my friend.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/11/2025 10:44:00 AM
Thank you for your comforting words. May the sun shine upon you.

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