Up Where It Belongs

Strewn by knitted spines and a tail, with ribbons on its hair, bright flowing visions hover along an azure sky. Gracefully, the flight takes a diamond shape as if to roam away in some twirling prance. And as it slowly faded from sight, the little boy on the beach giggled and tugged the braided loop calling his paper wing, “ Come back; I’ll have to pull you in.” But it waved on like an entranced sail kissing the clouds; till near dusk marked the rising moon…quietly, he rested on the sand to gaze at the breezy sky again; this time a bit aware the kite he handmade and loved won’t come back… for it is up above where its home belongs. ~ New Year Premiere Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand
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Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 11:04 AM
Lovely. Love the child's perspective. Congrats on your win, nette.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 3:55 AM
What a sweet story Nette! Congratulations on your fifth placement!
Wigley Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 12:46 AM
Lovely write, with a lovely truth, nette. Congrats! Viv x
Y. Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 6:17 PM
Hi Nette, This was a delightful tale with a good moral. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Chansarkar Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 2:52 PM
What a great lesson of knowing when to let go.Congrats Nette!
Arnone Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Touching. Very beautiful (I flew many kites in my day). Congrats! :-)
Vaillancourt Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 5:15 AM
Your skills at the usage of metaphor and similes are amazing. Great piece of writing!
Ryerson Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 4:05 AM
LOVE this gem Nette...Your description of the kite in the first part, then the boy flying it, concluding with that wonderful last line all in the shape of a kite!...Congrats my friend - Tim
Undertaker Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 9:47 AM
congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish
Anglesey Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 4:33 PM
A very breezy and picturesque poem. Well done. Congrats on your win :)
A  Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 2:42 PM
Nette, love it ....... congratulations!!! Love ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 6:31 AM
Good morning Nette, CONGRATULATIONS''' Thank you for the lovely entry.:-) When you have time enjoy the winners and my sweet blog * Called "The Liberty Bell" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15780&PoetID=18720 Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... PS... stop by my newest poem if you like. "Summer Rain" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=498166 XOX-love Linda
Allen Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 6:19 PM
Lovely, light and whimsical piece. Well thought out and well constructed. Havent heard from you since you reviewed Awe Shucks. I have another one for you that I think you will get a kick out of called Vexation . I warn you it is unusual.
Guzzi Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 6:23 PM
To my fav's ;) from one sky dancer to another ! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 9:52 PM
A wonderful journey with your Kite and congratulations on your winning nette xx
Maverick Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 3:19 PM
Warm wishes on the winning placement here Nette..)
Brown Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Lets Go Fly A Kite" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Burch Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 9:57 PM
Congratulations Nette!! on your win...what a lovely piece here! Very well done...big hugs,love deb
Song Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 6:10 PM
A Hallmark-like moment as boy and kite say their goodbyes, Nette. The 3 judge panel was wow'd by the wording and the boy's reconciling tho'ts...Yes, the kite was where it wanted to be! So delighted to find out that you wrote this one! Spectacular scene! :) Gwendolen
Ditshwele Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 12:33 AM
Congrats Nette on your win. Keep the good work up
Prabhu Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 11:45 AM
Nette......congrats on the placement in the contest.....~sashi.
Prabhu Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 11:44 AM
Nette......congrats on the placement in the contest.....~sashi.
Brown Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 11:16 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "April Poem" contest Nette. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 12:03 AM
Nette, thank you for your wonderful entry... CONGRATULATIONS~ ;-) ALWAYS *PD
Devnath  Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 10:44 AM
Wonderful expression of image where one is and from where he belongs. Loved always, bl
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