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Up In Smoke

Once, there burned a fire deep within my heart
but that was long ago, before love was torn apart
Scribed were pages of sonnets, romance at its best
I shelved the albums by virtue of my own behest
because they caused me too much pain and sorrow,
and so, I thought, 'I'll get rid of them tomorrow.'

Ten years went by, but today they were torched
Memories, up in smoke, my poems were scorched
I couldn't bear to read them, or I would reminisce
Flames sputtered their cries with an incessant hiss
Sheafs penned when with love I was sorely smitten,
verses and lyrics for countless songs he had written

Gray clouds hovered; tainted air encircled my head
Edges of curling parchment were singed as ink bled
I watched them crinkle and smolder in the trash
The wind carried my words swirling in flurries of ash
I was renewed with pain as I breathed the smoke 
It felt like my heart was mourning as thunder broke

There was a tightness in my chest and my throat
I was drowning in the rain, trying to stay afloat
Sparks fed my sadness as smoke drifted to the sky
Sobs escaped from my lips in an emotional outcry
The storm soaked the remainder of prose and verse
I turned and walked away with a groan and a curse




January 17, 2022
This or That, Vol 9 Contest
Edward Ibeh, Sponsoring
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Baker Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 3:45 PM
Powerful, passionate poem, Lin. I've experienced that type of hurt. It seems death would be so much more merciful. The 7 worst months of my life followed, looking back death would have been better. But I made it through, and life is better than I ever could have imagined during those 7 months of hell. I'm glad you're able to write again. A poet friend in Texas, Bill ... Hugs
Kauffman Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 10:09 AM
Lin, congratulations on your win with this wonderfully written poem filled metaphoric depth and wonderful images. Connie is right - it is poignant as you describe your journey from love lost to letting go on the edges of healing. All the best blessings to you and your healing heart.
Ibeh Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 5:15 AM
Outstanding work, Lin:-) Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
Daniel Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 6:28 AM
This is really amazing poetry, Lin, congratulations on top win:)
Lane Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 6:35 AM
Many thanks, Jo.
Alex Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 7:42 PM
Beautiful work. Congratulations!
Lane Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 6:35 AM
Thank you, Chris.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 4:13 PM
This masterly poignant poem is sure to take a top winning position Lin. What a talent you possess! Bravo! I loved this. Blessings xxoo
Lane Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 2:37 AM
Hi Connie. Thank you so very much for your kind encouragement. I hope all is improving in your world. Hugs.
Cunningham Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 3:29 PM
It was the right thing to do Lin and I hope it brings you closure. Knowing they were there must have always been on your mind taunting you. We can't change the past but we can plan for a brighter future. Hope you're well. Tom
Lane Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 2:36 AM
It did bring some closure, Tom. I should've done it much sooner. Thanks for your wise insight.
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