Sunlite Wanter Poet Free verse

Up In and Among the Clouds

Up and Among the Clouds


Up and among the clouds 
Feet never on the ground,
Missing points, forgetting things,
Always stumblin’ round.


It’s kind of fun up in the air,
Looking for keys, fighting a sneeze,
With no rain coat,
Floating around, unprepared.


Getting lost on the road
Fun on a different path to the store,
At least seeing new scenery,
Oh, yes, did I say that before?


Did I buy that on my card or check,
The bank is wrong, I know,
Well, that’s what you’d expect,
From child tellers, not even grown.


Up here in the clouds I wear
One shoe of brown, one of black,
Well, don’t ask me to explain,
I was worried, cut me some slack.


Forgive the snarls in my hair
I once wore in a pony tail,
A free spirit up in the clouds,
Floating, I can never fail.

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Old Buck November 8, 2017 at 7:44 PM There will be grey hairs everywhere that will enjoy your description of a normal day. It's about like John's description of heaven. He didn't have the words. You've found the words for this and put them in good order. Thanks for sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

Charlie Smith November 4, 2017 at 10:49 AM Fun write Sunlite, thank you... Sunlite Wanter November 4, 2017 at 11:33 AM Thank YOU, Charlie!

Seren Roberts October 31, 2017 at 9:15 PM great poem to read Sunlite....Seren

Arthur Vaso October 31, 2017 at 9:13 PM A beautiful poem Sunlite Wanter, did you meet anyone up there in the clouds! :)

Silent One October 30, 2017 at 7:17 AM Be careful though, as there are many who have their head lost in the clouds lol... enjoyed your free flowing poem.. Sunlite Wanter October 31, 2017 at 6:39 PM Thank you! Maybe that would be fun????

Vijay Pandit October 30, 2017 at 6:06 AM Quite creative--and original--happy journey! Sunlite Wanter October 31, 2017 at 6:38 PM Appreciate your comment! Thank you.

Russell Sivey October 30, 2017 at 5:54 AM What a beautiful write about floating among the clouds with a gentle spirit! I surely enjoyed reading your illustrious write here this morning! You have displayed a magnificent art of a truly immense proportion, what a brilliant piece, Great Work my friend!! Sunlite Wanter October 31, 2017 at 6:38 PM Thank you, Russell! I try so hard!