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Up Up and Away

UP UP AND AWAY Don’t care what you say about airplanes. To me it’s just magic. . . . two hundred tonnes Of steel and sweaty passengers, waiting to be fed, Rumbling loudly on the runway at about a hundred Miles per hour : and one moment it’s on the ground And next moment it’s up in the air - with no sound. Don’t talk to me of lift and drag coefficients; It is simply magic : and that’s sufficient. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . Written on 9 October 2011 by Sydney Peck for Russell Sivey's Contest " Challenge - Max 8 lines "

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Date: 10/10/2011 5:58:00 AM
Enjoyed reading it alot.
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Date: 10/9/2011 6:17:00 PM
The passengers waiting to be fed rumble loudly, too; sometimes they grumble. They aren't impressed by no miracle.
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Date: 10/9/2011 3:03:00 PM
yiptee do, me too! inca binka bong and alakazoola bippety, too. sarcasm becomes ya did i tell ya i tried to give it up for lent one year? didn't work but i do b'lieve i'm gettin' better at not spewin' it at the unbelievibles. luck in the 'test, happiness~N
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