UP

Conservatives not going to 'loosen up'
Feminists say no to 'dressing up'
Millennials (still) refusing to shut up!
Cost of living going up
Police pointing guns- people held up
Peace advocates giving up
Children quickly growing up
Political race to move up
Radicals starting to stand up
History ticking- 
TIME'S
UP.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/12/2018 7:37:00 PM
Love this!!!! And thanks for your comment I'm new to this. Great work!!!
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 7/12/2018 8:29:00 PM
Thank you and you're welcome :)
Date: 7/12/2018 5:48:00 PM
Hello Jasmine, your poem said it well. So true, so true. have a nice evening my friend.
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 7/12/2018 8:25:00 PM
Thank you!!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/12/2018 5:56:00 PM
Welcome to poetry Soup. Looking forward to reading more poetry from you.
Date: 7/12/2018 8:54:00 AM
I like the ticking clock ending. I'm now closing in on the final straight and have opted to enjoy the journey. God Bless. D.
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 7/12/2018 12:41:00 PM
Thank you Dave!
Date: 7/12/2018 8:46:00 AM
Up up and away! A clever and thought provoking piece.
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 7/12/2018 12:40:00 PM
:) thanks!
Date: 7/5/2018 12:30:00 PM
Jasmine, poignant and truthful. Well written piece! History is ticking...
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 7/5/2018 5:31:00 PM
Thank you Gabrielle :)
Date: 7/3/2018 7:40:00 PM
So much said here, within these few lines of poetry. Powerful thoughts indeed. ~ Brandy
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 7/3/2018 7:42:00 PM
Thanks Brandy! :)
Date: 7/3/2018 5:44:00 PM
Straight up ... this is a very clever poem Jasmine:-) hugs jan xx
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 7/3/2018 5:58:00 PM
Much appreciated, Jan.
Date: 7/3/2018 3:05:00 PM
A very clever write. Well penned, Jasmine. T.J
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 7/3/2018 5:58:00 PM
Aw, thank you :)
Date: 6/28/2018 8:57:00 AM
Thanks for singing up. We need your company.
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 6/28/2018 12:41:00 PM
Thank you! :-)
Date: 6/28/2018 5:37:00 AM
Jasmine.. I enjoyed reading your work this morning. You're a gifted writer! come see me...
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 6/28/2018 12:43:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 6/27/2018 6:46:00 PM
everything's on its way up, dramatic, nice write Jasmine
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 6/27/2018 6:50:00 PM
Thanks Lewis!