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09/25/23

Unwritten Absecce

First Place

Contest by Ink Impress

UNWRITTEN ABSENCE Reminiscing bygone golden days spent once when our amour danced in glamour, two wobbling hearts tensely entwined. Now we are out of touch staying far apart. Your pearly pulses rhythmic in cadence searching for my unwritten absence. Morose memories haunting over lost love Those precious remembrances with whom to share ! Now each moment to ruminate glorious past ! But we are far away from each other ! Yet eternal bond was established between us. Me still carrying firm confidence : You are lamenting over my unwritten absence expecting my sudden appearance. Murmuring Zephyr caressing me ! Same tender breeze might brush your soft lips. We are far away staying apart. Even no rare chances to meet each other. Immense love preserved as treasures, impossible to measure ! Confined in fathomless depth not to reach ! Hence ! While dreaming of my unwritten absence I know, your expectation yearns for my presence.

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Date: 9/29/2023 2:22:00 AM
Very heartfelt and evocative write this is, i love the rhymes and flow and imagery you’ve painted too in a descriptive lyrical cadence! Love the way you’ve woven words especially the opening really stood out for me and i felt the depth of this poem! Thank you for sharing this for the contest. Congratulations on winning.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 9/29/2023 7:14:00 AM
Thanks to appreciate the poem written for your Contest. Blessings. Have Great Days.
Date: 9/24/2023 10:23:00 PM
This is such a beautiful and heartfelt creation for the contest.. There's a beautiful sense of unconditional love yet an aching feel of separation from the lover as nostalgic reveries dominate the hours of today. So gorgeously crafted with so many evocative emotions.. Deeply conveyed as well!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 9/29/2023 7:14:00 AM
Thanks and Love.
Date: 9/24/2023 9:22:00 AM
Beautiful and free.
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