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Unworthy

As he, reeling, roamed the back streets the grimy alleyways, the filth weighed on him He, born to privilege, was unworthy no better -- No! the same as -- the stooped figures scurrying into the shadows of despair

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/25/2019 12:46:00 AM
It is amazing how life has a way of leveling the playing field.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/25/2019 1:27:00 PM
Great expression there, Caren: 'leveling the playing field.' Thanks, gw
Date: 11/24/2019 2:57:00 AM
Sry wellwritten Gershon! Still your work makes me smile!;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2019 1:14:00 PM
No kidding, Brenda. I'm gong to have to dub you 'Smiley! ~ The Chuckler
Date: 11/23/2019 9:34:00 PM
matters not the upbringing, everyone can be caught in the shadows of despair... the filth is hard to clean from a soul though... hugs
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2019 12:02:00 AM
You're right on both counts. here's to a clean conscience and a clean heart! :) gw
Date: 11/23/2019 8:29:00 PM
Hi Gershon. Nicely written. Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2019 12:01:00 AM
Thanks for the view and the comment, my friend! Peace, Gershon

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