Unwise

Burglar breaks into wrong house
One angry home owner he did rouse
Tough Grandma throws a trash can;
wildly swings a frying pan
He scurries away like a mouse



Submitted for...
Make Me Laugh with Some Humor - Any Form - New Poems Poetry Contest
(Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 
Date written: 12/12/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Allison Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 12:40 PM
what a wonderful scene with grandma and the pan, many congrats on your win Edward:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 6:08 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)
Roper Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 9:58 PM
Congratulations on your win,Edward , good one. . Hugs Eve
Ibeh Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 7:06 AM
Thank you very much, Eve:-)
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 6:25 PM
Back again to congratulate you. this really IS super cute!
Ibeh Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 7:04 AM
Thanks again very much, Andrea:-)
Y. Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 2:58 PM
Hi Edward, Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, my friend:-)Alexis
Ibeh Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 4:18 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis:-)
Kitchin Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 3:45 AM
Ed, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny limerick!
Ibeh Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 5:12 AM
Thank you so much for my placement, Tania:-) Happy holidays!
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 11:42 AM
Cute humor, Edward. Sorry I've been too busy to comment lately. Let me try to see one other of your newest writes.
Ibeh Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 11:52 AM
No need to apologize, Andrea:-) Life gets in the way, whether we like it or not, lol! I appreciate the visit, my friend.
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