Unwise

Burglar breaks into wrong house
One angry home owner he did rouse
Tough Grandma throws a trash can;
wildly swings a frying pan
He scurries away like a mouse



Submitted for...
Make Me Laugh with Some Humor - Any Form - New Poems Poetry Contest
(Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 
Date written: 12/12/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/21/2020 12:40:00 PM
what a wonderful scene with grandma and the pan, many congrats on your win Edward:-) hugs Jan xx
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/21/2020 6:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 12/20/2020 9:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Edward , good one. . Hugs Eve
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/21/2020 7:06:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve:-)
Date: 12/19/2020 6:25:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you. this really IS super cute!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/20/2020 7:04:00 AM
Thanks again very much, Andrea:-)
Date: 12/19/2020 2:58:00 PM
Hi Edward, Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, my friend:-)Alexis
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/19/2020 4:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis:-)
Date: 12/19/2020 3:45:00 AM
Ed, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny limerick!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/19/2020 5:12:00 AM
Thank you so much for my placement, Tania:-) Happy holidays!
Date: 12/14/2020 11:42:00 AM
Cute humor, Edward. Sorry I've been too busy to comment lately. Let me try to see one other of your newest writes.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/14/2020 11:52:00 AM
No need to apologize, Andrea:-) Life gets in the way, whether we like it or not, lol! I appreciate the visit, my friend.
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