Unwelcome Guest

Time marched ahead relentlessly,
While I was unaware.
I jogged around the corner and
Old age was waiting there.

I didn't want to meet her,
But had to be polite.
She said she'd like to stay with me,
Perhaps just over night.

I let her stay, " Oh, woe is me!"
She hasn't gone away.
She brought such heavy luggage that
I fear she's here to stay.

A satchel full of aches and pains,
A bag of moans and groans.
She is becoming so entrenched
I feel her in my bones.

She follows me around all day
And spoils my appetite.
If I escape to early bed,
She awakens me at night.

Take my advice dear younger friends,
Don't stop to tell her "Hi"
If you should catch a glimpse of her,
Just keep on jogging by.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/23/2018 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Gregory. I am trying to catchup with my computer's impudence with me yesterday. Just another day in the life of an aged person. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/23/2018 3:20:00 AM
My knees are giving out, but I will keep on jogging ... some days I'm chasing time, some days it's chasing me, but we both afford each other some space. A lovely write, Joyce - thank you for sharing! Blessings! :-) <3
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Date: 8/13/2017 4:25:00 PM
Lol, This is so cool. Love it. I am saving it.
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Date: 4/30/2017 11:58:00 AM
I will tell the unwelcome guest to find another place to live. Telling her she is not wanted here. A 7 Joyce. Nice to meet you.
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Date: 4/14/2017 10:57:00 AM
Your Nemesis's kin live at our house. They are the uninvited squatters. I made a conscious decision to ignore them and so far except for the occasional sting they chuck my way it seems to be working. Mind you I am not old, I'm only 70 !
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Date: 4/13/2017 11:51:00 AM
Awesome write Joyce, really enjoyed.
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Date: 4/9/2017 8:08:00 PM
Well-written Joyce, made the same mistake you did, just trying to be friendly. Sometimes my grandson will scare her away for awhile; but alas when I return to routine, she rouses herself off the couch and pesters me near to death. Congratulations on your placement but more so on your fine poem. A 7 and a favorite.
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Date: 4/9/2017 6:41:00 PM
Unfortunately Joyce, 'She's a stalker" Had a good laugh when reading this. Thanks for entering the contest
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Date: 4/7/2017 2:09:00 PM
I agree with the subject and all you say. Beautifully written, enjoyable read. All too true
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