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Unwanted Passenger

Stomping 
   Stomping 
       Stomping 
Stop,
Please 
No control, 
Vehicle lurches 
But I’m just a
Passenger on this
Road of life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 5/6/2023 12:15:00 PM
I'm just passing through looking for a poetry home. I chanced upon your poem. I didn't see that ending coming. Such a clever and poignant poem. It certainly tells life as it is in a very clever, mindscape way.
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