Unwanted Filthy Rags

”Negative words can create a negative image of self; embrace negativity and let it be fuel to your inner positivity, to see self in a positive light.”

Quote _by Poet

For many years I struggled to see my self-worth,
Thought I was a useless piece of discarded trash.
My low opinion of self, made me question my birth.
I longed for my dark days to zoom by in a flash.

I was made fun of when I attended grade school. 
I believed every negative thing that was said;
My sad life was so overwhelming and cruel,
I spent most of my days in my full-sized bunk bed.


As time went by, feelings for self-started to shift,
I started to entertain ” liking” who I was,
Soon positivity came, it was such a gift.
My attitude started to change without applause.
 

No longer did I see unwanted filthy rags.
I saw my worth and value in my brokenness,
Now I view negative energy as red flags,
Folks talk about me these days, for outspokenness.


For many years I struggled to see my self-worth,
I was made fun of when I attended grade school.
As time went by, feelings for self-started to shift,
No longer did I see unwanted filthy rags.


Contest: My Created Form
Sponsor: Constance La France
11/29/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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La France Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 4:07 PM
Alexis, congratulations on your win in my Created Form- Rhyme4-Mix Contest with this wonderful poem, I like your quote too _Constance
Evans Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 9:36 AM
Congrats! Yes, words are powerful.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 8:25 PM
Congrats on your win. ~~
Seeker Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 6:52 PM
“My attitude started to change without applause” ~ superb! Congrats on your win, Alexis!
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 2:21 PM
Congratulations, Alexis, on your placement for this rhyme on progression toward positive worldviews!!
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 4:40 AM
Sometimes it takes a long time to figure out who and what we are...looking in the mirror sometimes gives us a bad reflection of what we truly are...and obviously you are a beautiful and wonderful woman. Very touching, Alexis. It took me awhile also to break away from my shell and see myself for who and what I was. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs & Love...Charlie
Ligon Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 8:49 AM
Touching poem. Many of us have problems with our self worth, especially growing up. I too changed perspective as I got older. What opened my eyes was a passage in the bible, 1 Corinthians 12:12-31 referring to the church body. You were created for a special purpose with unique gifts, and we all need each other because we are not complete in ourselves.
One Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 8:06 AM
This is a deeply emotive response to the quote.. I want you to know that you are a lovely and sweet person and i see your worth as do so many people not only on here, but your friends also..
Pandit Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 5:27 AM
This is a powerful write Alexis--you reach many hearts with this touching poem. Best for a TOP win.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 1:21 AM
What I admire most in ths poem is the last stanza that can be a poem on its own. Best for a win. ~~
Edmonds  Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 1:13 AM
Alexis I’m glad you learnt to love yourself, as you love and are loved. Bad beginnings can make one strong when realising those who put people down have got things so wrong. A brilliant entry for the contest... Belle
Dome Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 1:04 AM
Hope this is not true my friend. it touched my heart. that was me. Hope you are ok and win the contest. take good care. Pete.
Y. Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 8:03 AM
Hi Peter, This poem is true to a certain extent. I had low self-esteem issues for most of my life. Thank goodness I'm in a better place. I hope you are too my friend. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 9:18 PM
Once a person's self worth comes from within, people lose the power to hurt them with cruel words. Your awesome poem is full of truth and positivity. Best wishes for the contest. :)
Y. Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 8:00 AM
Hi Evelyn, I agree. I appreciate that you stopped and left such a kind comment. Thanks for your support. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Messina Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 8:47 PM
A self-feeling many have gone through in life, Including myself. Once we overcome the fear of self-worth we defeat our fears. Great write, Alexis. Wishing you the best in the contest. Also, thank you also for your recent comments..Much appreciated. Hugs Charlie
Y. Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 7:59 AM
Hi Charles, I'm so glad that you overcame self-worth issues as well. Thanks for wishing me well wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 4:54 PM
So happy for you and proud of your 'comeback' and your resilience, Alexis. Great write, Gershon
Y. Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 7:56 AM
Hi Gershon, Thank you so much. I appreciate your continued support. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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