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I welcome all the critique possible on this poem, no matter how harsh. Its how we learn, so please feel free. The question is when did the darkness set in?
Additional Notes: I was going through some old photos and papers, and I came across this poem on a piece of paper. I had written this in elementary school, so it made me smile, even it may be a terribly written poem, it shows I had a dark soul even then.
Handwritten note from teacher
Very good work
Keep trying ok?
You'll get better & better with practice.
Apparently she lied, that was the best I had!