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it's difficult to find inspiration
in a world that you've given up on
when you look around at the people
realizing there is no justification
rhyme or reason for all that they do
they just do
how dull

perhaps it's easy to scoff at the world
since i have given up on myself as well
from time to time

maybe it's because within this young vessel
behind these baby blues lies an old soul
that recognizes our worlds true potential
and sees we've taken the wrong path

however
don't mistake my disinterest in society
for lack of compassion towards humanity
i love our species
just as much for our faults
as i do for our good

and while i find it hard to socialize
when standing along side the living
know that i would do anything for you
give you my wealth, food, shelter and clothing
and that i would lay down my life for you
and be honored to lay at rest beside you

for we are all a part of the same entity
i am a part of you and you are a part of me

the physical world unravels before my eyes
and all i see is a subconscious network
filled with the essence of creation
from our lifes energy
and whether we realize it or not
when one of us falls
we all feel it
the universe feels it

maybe i wasn't ready for the world
or the world wasn't ready for me

there has got to be something more

i just hope that when i fall and you feel it
you'll know it was me and smile
knowing i welcomed it as i welcomed you
with a warm smile and loving embrace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/17/2014 5:58:00 PM
'the grotesqueness of everyday events masks the real misery of the passions' Barnave
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Date: 6/8/2014 10:26:00 AM
M Raven, i knew by reading your poetic name, you are A POE fan, as I am.. The Tell Tale heart is my fav, and so is the Raven... LOL,, I read the Raven to my youngest daughter the other night, she wanted a bedtime story.. LOL... she loved it... PD
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Date: 6/8/2014 9:57:00 AM
ps... I like your poetic name so much, .. I'm invite you to read one of my poems, " The Camarilla " I dedicated to a poet name Nate D... after reading his Malkavian poem.... http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=343134 LINDA
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Malkavian Raven
Date: 6/8/2014 10:23:00 AM
I'm a big fan of Poe's work, and call it cliche but 'The Raven' is my favorite piece of his. That, coupled with my interest when I was younger in V:TM, I always thought the raven in the story had a bit of Malkavian in it. ;)
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Date: 6/8/2014 10:00:00 AM
Here's that poet's name NATE D. ...... http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poems_by_poet.aspx?ID=20599
Date: 6/8/2014 9:56:00 AM
Hi Malkavia Raven, a loving, sweet feel. I like the way you offer a warm smile. It's so easy to fall now a days. However, sweeter, when the other partner feels and embraces the same feelings. hugs...Linda
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Date: 6/2/2014 10:59:00 PM
An ode to acceptance, not passivity...I enjoyed reading this.
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Malkavian Raven
Date: 6/2/2014 11:19:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time out to read it, Leo. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Love & light, brother.
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