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it's difficult to find inspiration in a world that you've given up on when you look around at the people realizing there is no justification rhyme or reason for all that they do they just do how dull perhaps it's easy to scoff at the world since i have given up on myself as well from time to time maybe it's because within this young vessel behind these baby blues lies an old soul that recognizes our worlds true potential and sees we've taken the wrong path however don't mistake my disinterest in society for lack of compassion towards humanity i love our species just as much for our faults as i do for our good and while i find it hard to socialize when standing along side the living know that i would do anything for you give you my wealth, food, shelter and clothing and that i would lay down my life for you and be honored to lay at rest beside you for we are all a part of the same entity i am a part of you and you are a part of me the physical world unravels before my eyes and all i see is a subconscious network filled with the essence of creation from our lifes energy and whether we realize it or not when one of us falls we all feel it the universe feels it maybe i wasn't ready for the world or the world wasn't ready for me there has got to be something more i just hope that when i fall and you feel it you'll know it was me and smile knowing i welcomed it as i welcomed you with a warm smile and loving embrace

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Date: 6/17/2014 5:58:00 PM
'the grotesqueness of everyday events masks the real misery of the passions' Barnave
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Date: 6/8/2014 10:26:00 AM
M Raven, i knew by reading your poetic name, you are A POE fan, as I am.. The Tell Tale heart is my fav, and so is the Raven... LOL,, I read the Raven to my youngest daughter the other night, she wanted a bedtime story.. LOL... she loved it... PD
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Date: 6/8/2014 9:57:00 AM
ps... I like your poetic name so much, .. I'm invite you to read one of my poems, " The Camarilla " I dedicated to a poet name Nate D... after reading his Malkavian poem.... LINDA
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Date: 6/8/2014 10:23:00 AM
I'm a big fan of Poe's work, and call it cliche but 'The Raven' is my favorite piece of his. That, coupled with my interest when I was younger in V:TM, I always thought the raven in the story had a bit of Malkavian in it. ;)
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Date: 6/8/2014 10:00:00 AM
Here's that poet's name NATE D. ......
Date: 6/8/2014 9:56:00 AM
Hi Malkavia Raven, a loving, sweet feel. I like the way you offer a warm smile. It's so easy to fall now a days. However, sweeter, when the other partner feels and embraces the same feelings. hugs...Linda
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Date: 6/2/2014 10:59:00 PM
An ode to acceptance, not passivity...I enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 6/2/2014 11:19:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time out to read it, Leo. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Love & light, brother.