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The sand is so soft Orange light in the distance A storm is coming

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 3/12/2013 1:25:00 PM
Orange is my favorite color... it must have been a beautiful sight!
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Date: 2/26/2013 7:13:00 PM
Really beautiful haiku :)
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Date: 2/26/2013 5:07:00 PM
Nice one, Jeremy. I see you did a few more. Let me go look
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Date: 2/26/2013 10:03:00 AM
i can see a mandarine sky and feel strong winds blowing..This is my favoutite of your 3 sweet posts
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Date: 2/26/2013 9:37:00 AM
this is so lovely poem.. luv and enjoyed your great write my friend Jeremy ..and appreciate so much your dropping by <3 all the best :) Sk
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Date: 2/25/2013 9:13:00 PM
ha ha Jeremy, your going posting crazy and I like it...i will read a few more, then log out... s ... super... hope the storm don't come my way... pd
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/27/2013 1:57:00 PM
Thanks, PDA. You make me smile