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The sand is so soft
Orange light in the distance
A storm is coming
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hicks Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 1:25 PM
Orange is my favorite color... it must have been a beautiful sight!
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 5:07 PM
Nice one, Jeremy. I see you did a few more. Let me go look
Chircop Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 10:03 AM
i can see a mandarine sky and feel strong winds blowing..This is my favoutite of your 3 sweet posts
Komala Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 9:37 AM
this is so lovely poem.. luv and enjoyed your great write my friend Jeremy ..and appreciate so much your dropping by <3 all the best :) Sk
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February 25, 2013 at 9:13 PM
ha ha Jeremy, your going posting crazy and I like it...i will read a few more, then log out... s ... super... hope the storm don't come my way... pd
Martin Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 1:57 PM
Thanks, PDA. You make me smile
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