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Sitting,
Enveloped in greyness,
In the passage a lightness grows,
Sounds begin to soften
As he wind begins to rise,
The lapping of waves,
Like building of energy,
Keeps a consistent beat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 9, 2012 at 7:27 PM
Im not sure I understand this completely, but am compelled to read it over and over..well done. Small typo..as The wind beins to rise..BG
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