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Sitting, Enveloped in greyness, In the passage a lightness grows, Sounds begin to soften As he wind begins to rise, The lapping of waves, Like building of energy, Keeps a consistent beat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/9/2012 7:27:00 PM
Im not sure I understand this completely, but am compelled to read it over and over..well done. Small typo..as The wind beins to rise..BG
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