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Just to see your mouth frothing,
and your un-consicous-ness,
and the doctor declares
all your battling and history
has been for nothing.
I still remember
your first hospital stay,
I bought you chewies
that were your favs,
You said "thank-you for this"
With a cheery smile,
though it was the storm
of what was to come.
I asked God to forgive you,
so many fricking times!!!

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Date: 8/14/2025 2:43:00 AM
It can be so hard to be cheery when a loved one is in hospital with illness, but you cant beat chewies to bring a smile. A subject worth writing about is always a pleasure to read. Thanks Ryan.
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