Untimely Rising

There once was a man in tight blue jeans.
Whose woman was covered in sunscreens.
     She rested her slipper	
     on top of his zipper.
Which caused a quick swelling of man veins!!

05/26/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 12:24 AM
Noelle,, :) Congratulations, on your win. "Luv Linda"
Kendrick Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 6:11 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara
George   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:42 PM
loll!!! So funny, Noelle. Many congrat's on youe win. Elaine
Chutani Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 12:45 AM
Congrats for the win. Mohan
Devereau Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 11:40 AM
Thank you so much for your nice comments...Noelle
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 8:44 AM
I see you did enter this one. Congrats on your win.
Devereau Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 11:40 AM
Thank you so much...Noelle
A  Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 7:33 AM
Noelle, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~
Devereau Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 11:40 AM
Thank you so much...Noelle
Mehta Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 9:56 PM
Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, Noelle
Devereau Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 11:39 AM
Thank you so much...Noelle
Lamoureux Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 10:14 AM
Ha ha, I hope you entered this one in the Bawdy Bawdy contest.
Devonshire Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 6:15 AM
Laughing out loud, Noelle. I hope you entered this in the Bawdy Humor contest. It's so clever - especially the last line. Awesome! Welcome to Poetry Soup. You'll enjoy sharing your words here. Best wishes, Carolyn
Devereau Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 8:16 AM
Thank you so much for the warm welcome and yes I did enter this in the contest....have a good day...Noelle
Frankel Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 4:14 PM
ha, very witty, and great title. enjoyed this! :) best wishes, Alex
Devereau Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 8:07 PM
Thank you Alex for the nice comments...Noelle
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 9:48 PM
hahaha, this was funny!!! Good to see a limerick like this one.
Devereau Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 10:18 PM
Thanks for the nice comments....Noelle
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